Please someone translate this novel huhu so sad that a good novel like this is left to rot. Up Up Up support support support support support support support support
Disgusting trash where he’s in love with a woman who’s been c*mmed in hundreds of times by his own father, but she just manipulates the MC into thinking she loves him.
Absolutely garbage.
Overall Ive only read like 20 chapters and will definitely continue reading this story. Minor grammatical mistakes but none bad enough where you dont know what the author is saying. HUGE harem story Filled with humor and action. Also author i think it would be smart if you were to make an auxiliary chapter thats just a list of all the mc wifes with their name, race, and power, because i keep getting people mixed up lol.
Well the book is pretty good, if u like system novels.
Ig, but the author seems to love the whole u go into a situation and it continuously get more and more out of hand, like ik why he does it, to make the story longer, keep us "on the edge" and more "interested". But he has done it like 4 times already. And it's just become more and more annoying. I say its poor story development/writting, i want to say the author doesnt know how to write a balanced battle/ event so he does this to continue it. Of course its my opinion. But of thats his writting style, i think im just gonna get tired of him dragging out events.
Also I find it interesting how the author keeps having the mc bash his earlier parents because of their malicious behavior to justify joining the church but clearly explained that the church can be just as bad with the divine knights. Like tf, i dont need you to not to join them, i just dont want u saying one is more good than the other, its dumb, fake, and lackluster. I dont like seing the mc make dumb excuses, but rather his acknowledge the fact that he joined the church as a good way to wash his identity and find an organization to be safe it. And if he wants to align himself with the church to do that, then do it, but say thats why ur doing it, not this bs. And the author keeps pushing this message by saying the church can use ur star or what ever to see if ur bad, it didnt work before w the divine knights, and prob doesnt work now. So stop lieing.
And if the author will continue doing this nonsense, then i think the story will be executed poorly.
Aside from bad character writting, poor story in these events, the world background seems to be alright, ig .... Idk its trial reads after all ...
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need more, please come back
the monotone convos with a hint of emotion is great
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this is a nice one the storyline the plot and the setting is just wow so astonishing i must admit this is a well organised wonderful literally work
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Just my two cents here but it was a pretty decent story. That lasted until he met a female human, where he proceeded to throw away the last 19 chapters, his backstory, his brain and his b*lls all so he could bend over backwards for this girl as if he's a 12y/o who just got introduced to p*rn.
locked after 4 chapters HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA