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Queen looks at her surroundings and saw the young lady unconscious and bleeding. "Oh my!" She looks at the young lady before her. She bit her lips in anger. "Who fire this car?!" She asked herself. She puts the USB that the young lady had given her and put it inside the pocket.
Looking at the limp body of Garnel before her, her legs gave out as she scrambled to get away from his body.
"So what did they say?" Isse eager as ever, asked.
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AUTHOR We need more chapters ! 9999+ chapters. I like how MC is smart and intelligent instead of being stupid. I do wish you throw some good harem but where it starts developing slowly towards love. Also please stop making him be scared or beta infront of the girl at times its not cool when he gets scared etc. I mean he is the one who is managing everything so why be scared of her when he is the one who saved her from slavery....
very good novel need more chapters of the novel
A small backpack made it company, and as she opened it and emptied it of its treasure a plastic bottle, the kind any vending machine would spit out after being bribed with a few coins, saw daylight. It was accompanied by a lunch box and a few napkins onto which she placed chopsticks and a mug to hold them down in the weak breeze.
Started this book just to test it out, planning to stick with it! Definitely recommend it to readers looking for more from their WN experience. The text is beautiful descriptive, painting a vivid image of scenes, action and characters alike. The author really finds his stride and strikes a nice balance between his descriptions and dialogue. For me, it’s clear and natural to read. Easy flow.Have to commend the dialogue! It’s a pet peeve of mine when dialogue serves as meaningless fluff, but here it’s full of interest and progresses the narrative. I love teasing, witty banter, sinister threats, bravado… I don’t think I’ll be disappointed. (…Glares at author and expects him to deliver!…)Well thought out world taking shape. Characters feel distinctive with a lot of potential—varied abilities, personalities, motivations, etc. I mayyy already be picking my favorites. ? The story doesn’t really hold your hand, but it’s easy enough to follow along (explanations do come). The author has an excellent command of the language, and there are minimal errors or typos. (Thank you!)Updates have been consistent with chapters of satisfying length. Scene changes are clear and easy to follow. Same for POV changes. Definitely curious where the plot is going and looking forward to the characters, action and machinations!
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Thank you for your new novel, I came here through your other novel "Apex System”. The VRMMORPG Genre is one of my favorites and your new novel is up to a very interesting start.