Hello, Author. Afraid that I cannot give the novel more than this so far due to the fact that there is quite a lot of grammatical mistakes and it kind of looks like it was written by a child. I cannot rate the Story Development, Stability of Updates, Character Design and the World Background yet as the novel is quite new, so I will keep that neutral for now.
I must say the synopsis basically said the entire development of the story. Like most people read a story or a novel to have the mysterious feeling of the plot slowly being unraveled. But this entire synopsis is like a spoiler to its on. Basically, the entire plot said the mc will succeed no matter what. It didn't even bother sugar coating the tone that the mc is always right and anyone that cast a disdainful glance to the mc or a lustful glance to the mc's soon to be waifus would be slaughter within the next hundred chapters. If you enjoy reading this novel, then you must have some serious inferiority-complex and could only read these type of things to boost your ego.
Pls continue give us nore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Japanese beta shota Protagonist brain, he takes punches and kicks and blows to his body like it is normal and correct occurrence and maybe pleasure. Absolutely no control of his emotions and...I am speechless. I got angered for no reason reading the first chapters. What is unique or not so used is that, this is based in Nigeria(Africa)?. You can imagine there will be fights in every sentence. The grammar and Punctuation are perfect(haven't been able to find any mistakes).
interesting story so far. hope can update frequently but hope Neha also can find her balance on her schedule :) keep it up Neha, don't forget to take care of your health too..looking forward to this story and character development
This novel of mine I intend to be as perfect as possible. If you support my work I appreciate it. I will take criticism but atleast read the story first before that. I hope you enjoy reading my novel if not I hope you find something better. Like Library of Heaven's Path are Desolate Era. I'm writing this for fun. If in the future webnovel would like a contract with me. That would be nice. For now I hope you enjoy my work. Not a professional writer just a fair warning.
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At last it's here.. ? I was looking forward to this novel from the time the voting started.. ?.. Now I want daily updates, mass releases and all for this novel...
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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The story started off ok until he was "reborn". It has a lot of inconsistencies. The MC seems know information that wasn't stated prior like people being able to give skills and so on. It honestly just got confusing and felt really rushed at points.
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