Love the novel. Obviously smut-oriented so it's gonna be the main focus. Can't wait to see what else you cooking.I personally will stick around until the funny Yandere happens at chapter 200.
all good but you do realize if you don't click onto the story it says Rise of the zodiac ki. fill in the gaps and a person who hasn't recognized this as king would probably think your story is rise of the zodiac killer. might gain or lose some people who might have read your story if they knew it was king. I thought it'd be killer. that's why I clicked on this.
Ok .. NGL. . the prologue alone got me hooked and even before I knew it, i read all 3 chaps .. It was so interesting, something I haven't read here in a while so I will definitely be looking forward to it!!
Maybe this is too early for a review since there is only one chapter. But this story definitely have potential. I will keep reading and keep the spirits high author.
Просто не понимаю твой гг просто из долбаящер. И еще долбаящер пришел из современного мира ведет, как проститутка всем говоря свой секреты. Просто не логично, просто из современного человека ничего книги не читал чтоли. И правильно что гг шалаву убили. Автор то что пишите про гг простая трата сюжеты ужасны, не говоря свои не поврежденных воспоминаний.
There isn’t a single thing unique about this book. Typical MC face slapping everyone and everything, x-girlfriend who abandoned him for antagonist, every single woman introduced being a world toppling beauty, and the typical Fat best friend did the MC. Not to mention the fact that it seems that the furor or translator was having a field day nd just pressing enter 1o times for every small sentence. it is such. A shame that Webnovel has such ow quality books. Worst part about it is the fact the book is most likely going to go premium, meaning we’re spending our had earned stones on some piece of trash book 9even tough most of the books on here are trash anyway)
Although I don't have many word to say I'll just say it's good from what I experience in reading this story
Keep it up author and don’t give up midway!!! 140 characters
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From the Novels in this week's trial reads, this is the ONLY Good NOVEL.... This Novel is as good as "Black Tech Internet Cafe System
This is definitely a hidden gem. A diamond in the rough. The story is amazing and the characters all have backgrounds that explain their personalities. Overall a great story and a must read.
The pace of this novel is so f**king slow, you could cut more than half of the words and the sotry wouldn’t lose anything significant. It’s not bad, but it needs heavy editing and cutting