"Su Shi Stop!"
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Pretty nice, is this dropped perchance. The synopsis makes it look like it has been dropped i wonder also i am write 5a ht heqa5 weah a h
For what it is, it gets the job done. No bullshit just straight into the action without pointless build up
There is alot happening at once, And the story is moving very fast. I'd like to see more please update update update update update update some more.!!!!!
The story development is really good and characters well designed.The story is flavored making it unique.Am keenly following to read more. Much appreciation to the author for great work is doing.
Thank you kind sir for giving me an rather unhealty addiction for this novel.
Good Novel but work on the Grammer, it's even worst than MTL.. lol.. but the plot is good though .
this is very good novel, came back to WN after a long time, and really can't believe my 1st pick turned out to be so good. great work man.only thing i didn't like was chapters seemed so short but maybe its due to its ongoing novel, otherwise if it was completed one i would have instead liked it even more lol. Not adding extra worthless words just to fill up the word count and chapters numbers, great job ?????❤️❤️❤️❤️
great read so far, looking forward to how it may develop
love the story but the translation throws me off and makes me not want to continue reading sometimes I plan to pick it back up if the translation improves
1 this might just be me being nit picky , but whatever the main character is using is not nen.Nen has restrictions on the user that allows the ability to be more powerful, take for example kuropika; can only use certain chains on the spiders or else he will die. By allowing the mc 100% talent at all types of nen you have practically ignored a key opportunity to define the mc. Because to me as of 10 chapters in the mc has no defining characteristics ,a jack of all trades does not always =god like, in this case it's just means there exist a character who can do what ever he wants withought the needs for justification.If you have read or seen HxH nen qualities is built off a characters personality(which cheredoe lacks) , and I concede to fact that this a hack system novel, however it still has to be logical. 2 This novel feels seriously jumpy, the mc just happens to meet several main characters if atg for seemly no reason withought hardly no space between each chapter. 3 I apologize to the author if this is found offensive, however I simply trying to give a honest and hopefully insightful review that might be of some use.