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MC goes full retard. You never go full retard, but the MC did. Dropped at chapter 159. More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words
Deep blue the only thing limiting this novel from topping the charts is the update speed, almost every other novel up there release from10-14 chapters a week, this would also bring benefit in increasing your fan base, please do consider. It’s honestly s hassle to wait for such a great novel with such slow speed, I sometimes even think of ignoring it for a few months, yet I still give any stones to this novel whenever they are refreshed.
when the author put slice of life and cultivation together and he watches his creation that is a man running around the cultivation world with his daughters in his back
Hmmm... its rated at 3.92, lemme put it back to 3.8 where it belongs. Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash!
I really had high hopes for this because Er Gen. Sadly they were misplaced.It seems that even the mighty Er Gen can't prevent himself from falling into the same old tropes, really disheartening to be honest. 10 chapters in and the MC finds his plotarmor, some qi refinement technique or some such thing.Then immediately after "finding out its name". Er Gen launches into multiple paragraphs explaining all this technical **** about this technique. The only probem is, THE MC HAS ONLY FIGURED OUT IT'S NAME, SO WHERE IS THIS FUCKING INFORMATION COMING FROM!?
Please webnovel, translate this novel, because I would like to know what the rest of the story is like.I've read all the available chapters, but that's not enough for such a good novel, with a real MC monk.
Want everyone to know, some spoilers are mentioned.This is not a typical fight (or romance) of a three kingdoms setting. Nor does it seem to be a Romeo and Juliet thing. While some characters are developed early on, many are not flushed out until around the 800 mark. The world overview also tends to be over-simplified with vast overreaching vagueness. Some context is lost in translation and editing, along with those "Auto Correct" errors going by unnoticed. As for the thoughts, I feel that this story is only beginning to ramp up. As for specifics, I'll talk about more.First off are characters. As was mentioned, development is just slightly better than trash at the beginning. Some were given personality and others were just introduced with a vague background (Playboy, Wealthy, Common Person... etc). Point is, who was the real "villain" at the start? Clearly it felt like it was only building up the characters for the SIG story arc. Clearly, Kashawen is the overall villain thus far. Felt like she was thrown their and forgotten after the first Tita Star arc. Personal Thoughts are listed on Elite, Good (5* and 4*).Elite: Aina, Wang Zheng, Ye Zisu, Yan Xiaosu, Lin HuiyinGood: Zhang Shan, Runan, Meng Tian, Yue Jing, Snow Li, Ai XiaosluSecond (and Third) are both World Building and Story Development. There is really no way to separate them. Honestly, the loss at IG was actually a thought I had when I got to the selection for Solar System Federation. Seriously.That's not to say that it isn't good, but rather it seems fantastic when compared to other stories. The only downside I see is that there's no distinction between whose story is being told... There should be something to denote that (Author and Editor failure?). Otherwise, it feels like the underdog hero defeating opponents to win the princess' and in marriage... Wait there's one thing that I feel strongly about and that is this story is OBVIOUSLY centered on Wang Zheng's ascension to and reformation of the Rand Empire. If you go in depth, you understand that the nuance of all his breakthroughs are that the Rubik's Cube (and by extension, Bonehead and Charcoal) seem to be an amalgamation of all existing and future technologies and techniques. Within the last 50 chapters, this belief solidified even more so. Even better is the inferences that can be made from the title itself. The story is coming together as a whole which is why Development is higher than the World Building. Ideally, the only issue here is the complete trash excuse of WZ being sent to Tita (and consequently almost dying) just because Aina kissed him after "beating" Atlantis. Somehow though I managed to keep reading past that and wound up 50+ chapters a day.Overall, the translation can be read and could use some better editing. Updates do seem to be regular for now too.I would seriously recommend this to anyone s a must read and tell them to hang on between the IG and Elite Academy X arc. It just lacks a villain until SIG arc. Honest thoughts without much thinking though.
has this been dropped or something? I have been waiting for the last 50 chapters like crazy (っ °Д °;)っ can i please be offered salvation!!!!!! side note, the story is epicly awesome ヾ(≧▽≦*)o
I had to pay to read a book that is not even finished. There should be a disclaimer to let people know before they pay.
The book is great but I want to know what happen to Su Furong family..Are they cast out from Gu Family?
Interesting book. Grammar could be better
Good book. A bit heated
