Good novel, good character design, but still could be better. I prefer your other work, Soul Eye. Was becouse of SE that I look for other work of you. And I think that you could finish SE first.
nice work author..... l really like ur writting skill as well.. and the story is very interesting... plzzz keep uploading more so that l can read more....all the very best and do upload more... l can't wait to read what the story....
Finally something interesting to read with new concept and it can easily hook up my interest.I usually don't read novel that are not interesting enough to hook me up in first few chapters. Thanks for the novel???.I was reading it and noticed that she used words to tell a story. just wow, didn't know that could be done. props to the author for this amazing discovery and use of the English language.Love the story so far, thanks.
Solid character solid world love the conversation and interactions. The mc is like able and funny and stays to his own business I love it. Only complaint is there not enough chapters!! Please release more!!
I follow IN VERSION and Project: Helix. This one shows a lot of promise. As expected author.
Mc Acts like he is forced into villianMake everyone hate him so that novel's mc became a hero???Just one wordS.T.U.P.I.D.............,..@,................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
very stable with updates, and to be honest it is a good story. HOWEVER , the writing is a bit funky, and grammer is pretty bad. not to the point it's unreadable , it can be enjoyed with a bit of effort. mc starts out horribly stupid however, and honestly the first 10 chapters will likely give you an aneurysm. character decisions do improve though. highly suggest Author find an editor though, it honestly the biggest thing holding this back.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you ????????????????
I like the story, I like the characters, i like the plot,i l like this concept. But i hate one thing. Writing quality, it is more worse than a mtl. So bad translation...
Good book. Try read it first. MC is not dumb & he is humble. The system is quite new for me, but I would rate it 4/5. Give it a try. You might enjoy it.
Erotic scenes you say...???Sounds interesting.........................*reads*.....All fun aside....the synopsis looks interesting, and I have great expectations for this novel.I just hope the will be frequent chapter updates
Quite a good Novel you have written there, I might say it is very good for a starter.Keep up the good work.??????????????????????????????