The beginning of the novel is good. Your approach of making the introduction(chapter 0) philosophical is intriguing.As I read further, I found the build up to be good too, even though I thought some things were odd, but that didn't affect the quality and flow. The scenes are interesting and that seems to be your strongest point so far, like, you are very good at writing moments. The problem I had in the middle is how much of it was "filler". A decent bit of it was character information and skill information (system time) that didn't really move things ahead but rather slowed them down and broke my immersion.I can't say much about the character design since there's not much to go off of. Most of the beginning was action and it's in the most recent chapters that you started showing his initial disposition. I guess we'll see...
Here is my review about Maiden Houdini:Worldbuilding: The worldbuilding is quite blend between magic and modern world which is I think it's quite alright. However, I do like the antagonistic group treated Maiden Houdini as the threat here which is quite nice direction. My suggestion is to flesh out the world more to make it more interesting.Characters: For me the characters here are enjoyayable especially with the main Character, Maiden Houdini. I liked Madame Houdini as a character as she has a quite charisma and quite a good escape artist too with using her tricks and wits. For other characters, I think they are okay for now, just needed to flesh out them more. Writing: I like the writing of this world with a detailed description about the world and the character attire. I also the action scene in this book which is quick, but still quite okay to be follow.Overall, this is a nice book to read and I would recommend it
“A wonderful novel that captivates the reader from the beginning, immersing them in a unique and deep fantasy world. The writer dazzles us with a smooth and engaging style, where the events harmonize with the development of the characters in an exciting way. The characters are filled with depth and details that make them vivid in the reader’s mind. The plot is thrilling, blending mystery and excitement with touches of philosophy and deep thinking. The novel stays with you long after you finish reading it, leaving you wanting to return to it again. A rich reading experience, full of inspiration and suspense.”
The book is good. add it to your library
Sensational quality, the best novel I have read. The plot is very exciting, I am looking forward to the next chapters.I definitely recommend it, it is of an unexpected quality for a Turkish author.
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I really like it so far. not usually into these genre books, but I am already hooked after a few chapters!
How is this not popular LOLi rate it 4.8. i would give a five all thats missing is a little Writing Quality.But this is One of my favorites.
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
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OOOOO MYYYY… I JUST LOVE WHERE THE STORY IS GOING. I LOVE HOW IT STARTED AND HOW IT IS GOING. THE AUTHOR DID A GREAT JOB. ❤️❤️❤️
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