A riveting work from this great author. Just the first chapter got me enraptured and compelled. Can't say more than this. It's definitely a must read. Five stars without effort
I give it a 4.8 why? This is the reason you, the author, should know.The main character did not reach the level of IQ Light Yagami.Therefore, the evaluation of the novel did not get a full score. Just kidding ? But I am serious when I said that the novel will get the full degree if you take the mystery and excitement from the anime Death Note.
So far it's a good novel about doomsday.Black hearted merchant indeed.
Good day Author! im done reading your masterpiece and i must say that this story deserves so much recognition as it has a good plot, character, events, and content. I am not fond of this kind of story but after i read yours i got curios and wanted to have more. I will add this on my collection so i can see how interesting this story will get. Continue on writing!
first of all i know my english is pretty bad but deal with it
lets split the review in two parts. the firstpart are chap1-48
if you like storys with are like written **** with cultivation to make it look better then this is your story atlest its one of the better ones of its kind
after chapter 48 the story makes the mother of all nosedives
everything exept the humor dies painfull i will put in some exampells
but there are stong spoilers
SPOILER DOWN BELOW
exploding dicks
erosuu tipexplosion
oh i allmost forgot he ****t his grandma she is 120
if all of shis dont bother you then this is the perfect story for you
These chapters keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book it’s really good and maybe a sequel
Keikokumars, I have read all your stories since they were first posted on Royalroadl years ago and remember waiting day by day for updates on this story till it was eventually finished. At the time, this story was one of my favorites, if not my number one favorite, as I loved the epic tale of regret, love and more importantly one man's undying quest to conquer the demons of his past which have haunted his every waking minute. While I will be the first to admit that overall your proise and dictation can come off a little bland and at times disharmonious with the improper use of either conjugation of word choice, I deeply enjoyed the tale that you weaved. When you decided to take down both this story and Novis Gaius from Royalroadl only to post it on Amazon, while I was disappointed at the time I also understood that this was probably your way of trying to follow your dreams while making money off of it. However seeing you post this story here with little in the way of changes in either the grammer/ syntax of your sentences or in the overall plot, I must confess that I am disappointed that such a high potential story has fallen short of my hopes. I came back to read this story after years since I wanted to reminisce on one of my favorite stories on Royalroadl only to find that it was no longer even available through payment on Amazon and is still only a little more than half way done on this site. I hope that you still finish fully posting this story so that others may read and enjoy the full tale, but only wish that if you are slowly reposting this story that you take the time to edit and improve on this story as the rest has already been written before.
Good novel, good character design, but still could be better. I prefer your other work, Soul Eye. Was becouse of SE that I look for other work of you. And I think that you could finish SE first.
Don't give up, sir. Your books is filled with your passion for it. As long as you continue to write, success will follow.Also, I suggest you go premium on this book. Webnovel helps promote premium books with stable updates.
I was really looking for an enemies to lovers kind of book, and I'm so happy I came across this. The banter between Genevieve and Alec is very entertaining, and you did a good job at decieving readers (in a positive way lol). One chapter i felt like they were finally getting along, and then the next, they hate each other again. Amazing ❤️
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I literally only read like three pages and the grammar was so ba di checked if it was an original by someone learning English. Because, you know, I can at least understand that.But no. This is a paid translation.Not worth. Get an editor, or a better translator.I'd honestly be better off with MTL, in my opinion. It'd probably be the same quality but the words would get translated exactly.