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Excellent world building, scheming and emotional understanding
For sure the best one out of this batch.
Nice Qidian you're the best showing them how it's done. Thanks for teaching me how to dual host. I hope you don't find if I host some of your novels on my website need some money from ads.
good book try to update more episodes regularly
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It’s pretty but the main characters race is not explained in any way, he seems to just be a human and the ash part has nothing to do with his powers. Another huge problem is that he acts like the game characters are real, why would I care about some random npc.
A great read with the a good slice of life, great world background and decent writing quality. Mcs character build is a bit annoying but bearable, feel he jumps to wild conclusions in various situations and make many not so bright decisions. Overall a good read keep it up author.
A very good read so far and I am now waiting for the next update so that I can continue with the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The no of updates per week keep on decreasing.
Hello everyone i have started to write My original novel please go and read it i think you will like it
Novel "That time i crossed over with Immortal System"
and please tell what you think about it in review section
the story is too slow till now chapters 86?the progress to kill protagonist is just barely there and this is like multi jump world type thing and he still barely making progress in his 1st world, and I didn't even like the protagonist,
