A dual cultivation sign-in novel.... could be interesting, but will depend on how much work the other puts into thr story development. Will give it thr benefit of the doubt and hope it gets picked.
Okay. First of all. I like this novel because of its content .but. Its super super slow. Both men and women want to do it(s*x). But its still took them more than 30 chapter. It should contain Yuri but author forcing himself not to write yuri just because maybe he himself doesn't like Yuri or because of readers. Forceful story progression was never my thing .But still its a good read.
Ridiculously childish character and the story is very poorly written. At least attempt to learn the language you want to write in before publishing. I'm fairly certain the author has never touched a woman, and it is really reflected in the way he writes; it's mostly logic straight out of bad hentai.As for the people complaining about r.a.p.e, well, just look a Greek mythology. A God of Lust would not necessarily be beneath such things.
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waste garbage nothing but pure reputation and no story someone says u r from evil sect everyone belives it blah blah and then another one say u r too and they also believe it i don't know which newbie wrote this but it's trash not worthy of wasting your time
Good story! But in my opinion, the mc is getting too strong to fast. Mc isn’t even getting used to his power. Without a good foundation, one is doom to fall. This isn’t the story for you if you don’t like story where mc suddenly get lucky and become really strong fast.
Is it raw or original on webnovel ?. review are not for novel just for writing ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Still relatively new I would give it a couple more chapters before making a true review....................... . . . . . . . . . . . . . dam this needs 140 characters to work lol will take a while.
Destroying the universe is nothing compared to a bad Review in terms of evilness. I actually Lol‘ed when I read that ?.I really hope for Foo to conquer the abyss and use its former master as his second spirit. (The first should be the skull)
It was ok. Alot of the issues arise from the fact that there was no editing in the novel. Author seems young but passionate, and I would advise to serve the content in a better-quality package. Keep up the hard work.
I haven't read a good VRMMORPG Novel in a while, so this has me hyped. It has a good storyline, and I hope for more action and reveal on the part of the Mc. It's not perfect, but it's still refreshing to read.
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