Awesome book! we need more chapters!!!!!!! We need more!!!!!!Give us mooooooore!!!pls? :DAaaaaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasasaassssssssaaaagggudoysiys8ys8tsigzitz
This novel was honestly very good at the beginning as it spawned a manhua and an anime but unfortunately, the author decided to throw away their opportunity by destroying an amazing novel. At the moment, this author is trying to rush through the entire story while only releasing a chapter a month. How is he rushing when he is only releasing a chapter a month? He decided to give MC apparently an infinite supply of cultivation items so he and the rest of his sect and anyone who allied themselves with him would be overpowered. With this rush, it has spawned numerous plotholes and it gets worse and worse as the novel slowly continues. I'm disappointed the author let down his readers and obviously let the popularity and fame get to his head and I can honestly say with how bad his previous works were and his disgusting work ethics I will no longer be supporting nor reading any more of the author's works.
One of my favorite novel, the story is well done ( with some time along chapter for nothing ), thank you for translatingThe most thing i like is the brick ....hihihihih
One of the best stories. So far.So great.Characters are great.World building is great.And the update is also consistent.Please keep updating
This novel is nice. Its because this novel shows the best side of humanity for me. Unlike other novels where the characters are selfish, conceited, greedy, and many more just so that it can highlight how good the mc is, how baddass the mc is, how can the mc faceslap others. The mc in this novel can do that effortlessly without the supporting characters doing something exaggerated. The people there help each others out compared to other novels where the mc will me mistreated because his an orphan, here, they help each other out and be optimistic about life. Overall, this novel can restore your faith to humanity.
Just wow. I liked it so much that i even bough coins for the first time :DD xD. Well Author Gj and keep it up :** <3
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I enjoyed the book a lot. Even if the protagonist comes off as rude and proud, but I'm guessing the author was going for that when he was talking in his head.Overall it's a good book. Personally I feel that there are some things that shouldn't be written so much. It takes away the mystery. Keep writing author.
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honestly, at first the story looked promising and even though the grammar mistakes were annoying, I still enjoyed it very much. Now for the story itself, I discovered how much unrealistic the MC power growth is and here I'm talking about how he amassed power so easily and no one was able to notice. I mean how none of his brothers or even his father noticed how a sudden powerful organization appeared and didn't investigate it at all. you say that they're good at managing and rulling and yet they didn't do anything to face against MC since they're the antagonists of this story so far and you made it too easy for MC to gather everything at his hands. you even made his mother a huge bank where he can get money easily at any time and any place. Second, the development of the world itself. you said that there exist people who can fly with swords and people who can become Devine like existences around here and yet you didn't even show one person who can do that or even how does the supernatural powers exist. Is it because of Qi? do people cultivate or are they born with it or something?Also, if such people exist, how didn't the kingdoms use them so that they can wage wars using these people so that they can become the most powerful kingdom. So far, we only saw Normal people fight and not like those fantasy battles using techniques and QiThird, MC new shit personality or should I say new MC(as you killed the previous one)Honestly, he's the main reason I hated the last few chapters and how he became. Honestly, character development wise, you were doing very good with each character you introduced and even the brothers and sister of MC were good enough for me and even the change of MC from heartless murderer to a good guy would've been awesome to read and would've made us happy but you throw that away like garbage just to create a stupid twist of the return of old personality. that made me really angry. finally, the thing I wanna talk about is how you suddenly made the enemy kingdom suddenly enter the province without MC or his organization discovering about it. you talked a thousand times about how he controlled the province and yet people easily infiltrated without him noticing anything at all. you also made this event so confusing with how bad your grammar in those chapters is and the bad change of POV that made it worse. In the end, I would like to say that first, the novel started good and showed great potential and even got me easily hooked and read more chapters but then it got worse and by the time I reached chapter 46, I hated it.please try your best to improve it
Writing Quality is as good as it can be (with some error's here and there but not anything major).Stability of Updates. With 2 chaps a day is really good, you can always comeback the next day and read 2 more chapters.Story Development is a bit slow in the start, but it builds up in later chapters, and frankly is really good.Character Design is a bit lacking in my opinion as I don't really know what the mc is looking like, other than he looks like his father, and what we were told in chapter 1.World Background is really good but slow, we first really get some world building in later chapter (around chapter 60)Altogether a really good story with good upload schedule, super immersed in the world, and is really looking forward to what happens next!
I am honestly in love with this book. Get me two strong leads and I'm good to go. I love Genevieve's spirit, and Alec's arrogance. ??The style of writing is chic, the use of words spectacular. I am wowed.