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Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
The plot and the story is something new for me, I did not expect a non-human MC (demon), at the moment the development of this is going very well, especially the part of the fights, brutal and fast. The world is also new, the extent of its technology is unknown, but it would not be surprising if they had spaceships.so far all very entertaining. keep it up, author-kun.
Alright then here we go after reading 10 chaps in. The novel has a unique story with an interesting lore of the Gods, definitely a more traditional-driven fantasy but it is quite enjoyable. The dialogues of the characters and their actions shape their personalities quite well, each character is easily distinguishable from the next. However, I advise the author to use more connecting words or conjunctions. The novel doesn't seem to flow very well with single short sentences that appear detached from each other. A few minor grammar errors here and there but it does not disrupt the overall appeal of the story. But I do strongly advise to look into linking the sentences to each other as when reading, it appeared that each sentence was a new single thought that had no relation to the other. That is the only issue that is hindering the potential greatness of the novel. Overall it is a wonderful read! best of luck to the author !
lot of sucking cut and if you are new transaction team . read it up 24 .fuvk up my mind.
Very good novel, i'd loved to be a mc, and i see that will be harem. Its doesnt suit my taste but i will try to overcome this if you dont do ****. Its seems modeled as cultivation chat group and i have high hopes for this novel. Thanks for your hard work autor!
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Liked the story up until now.....Can't wait to see more chapter!My only hope for the novel is to not adhere to the usual xianxia tropes and cliches and be something different,
this was a fun one,the characters are interesting the plot is also interesting the only problem is the world backround i think it needs more details about the sorrounding area but overall its good.
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Well, tbh the storyline quite similiar to those romance r*pe and child novel, but this novel do not have r*pe.With only few chapter the author make me feels like in roller coaster. I don't like a painfull love story, and this story is a painfull one. But I choose to read because it has few chapter. It has a fluffy scene too, and.... Ehem... A hot scene too.I'm tired of those romance novel they said, but it full of face slaping, never ending white lotus. But the novel hardly make me feel like on roller coaster and satisfied.This novel have it all, an independent woman, white lotus, heart break, lovey dovey and I'm satisfied.Thanks for the novel~