Hoping for fast updates. Seems like jay aslan story but hoping that this one won't get stuck ........,............,.....................................,
I don't care ima get those ratings back up. I don't care ima get those ratings back up. I don't care ima get those ratings back up. I don't care ima get those ratings back up.
The writing does a good job of setting the atmosphere and tension but is let down by grammar.Pacing is pretty good, the story moves along well. Each individual chapter also doesn't feel too long.
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One of the VERY RARE novels DESERVING a high rating. Reasons:* No fillers in close to 100 chapters.* Interesting characters with well described personalities.* Consistent quality in both story as well as spelling / grammar (great to read!).* Constant enrichment of world background - we (readers) learn about the world, magic and laws together with the MC, who is bound to go above and beyond the 'known standards' of the world.* World Background as well as political relations of relevant powers are well thought through, make sense and are consistent. Morals and values are DIFFERENT from Earth but are consistent in the setting.All the above makes this novel severely underrated - the ranking it deserves is much much higher. My recommendation: Read it! Every chapter is worth it!Thank you Bel for this great story!
If you like reading about an arrogant egoti idiot. then this is the book for you The author is a good author I didn’t see any grammatical errors or major problems with the story that make it unreadable. But the main character is so arrogant and stupid that I’m surprised that he’s not dead by chater 5 I will keep reading the book for now see if there’s any character growth maybe he becomes humble later on in the book.
Funny story, keep it up, and be more creative.You are good, please be yourself. Do not try to copying others. Its good to be inspired by other.Oh, and do not make the readers pleased. Its your story, your world. Yours. Not other people.Keep it up, i'm rooting for you.Fan +1
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i thought this will be different but its just another one of rhose face slapping noveli thought this will be different but its just another one of rhose face slapping novel
I don't understand why there are so many comments about the main character accepting the affection from the loli. It isn't pedophilia since there is no sexual attraction between them. Neither are they going to marry anytime soon. It is only an exchange in betrothal gifts to confirm their marriage in the future. Plus, it isn't even confirmed that the main character would follow through since he is just placating the loli right now. After all he can't just reject her cold heartedly, she is the close childhood friend he grew up with when he was young.
Ok I read all the free chapters and just gotta say that the mc is a total simp, he has a system that is way more op than the one in I’m really a superstar but lacks any kind of self improvement and just does whatever his sister says, basically he is only using the system to benefit his sister
interesting