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"Please don't call me that," She sighed. "Blake's fine."
The MC is a psychopath. He is an adult in a child’s body joking about the upcoming death of the uchiha clan. Cracking jokes about his genie teammates impending death even tho from his perspective she should be a child because he was raised in a different world and wouldn’t see a 10 year old as an adult lol. Even shinobi in the Naruto verse still look at young genin as children but this protagonist is comfortable to joke about her death. He acts more like the root agent kids with no emotions than the actual root agent kid in the academy lmao.
i like the storyline .....can't wait for more chapters
---> to all comment-readers: I really recommend this book !Without any backstory, the story starts in de middle of a kidnapping.?It immediatly captivates to know more about who, how, why, by who,...??Then the reason why stays mysterious and unclear while time, the storyline and feelings develop. The world background is a bit hazy but it contains magic tools and magic abilities for some people.?The relationship and conversations between the 2 main charachters is fun to read and emotions are nicely described.❣ I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR ? I'm intrigued to know and read more about how the story will go !PLEASE UPDATE LOTS AND FAST❤❤❤
Another great story by Pancake.
Author your ideas and conyepts are really good and unique in this novel but maybe its because of grammar or those weird mix words that disrupts the pace and likeness of this novel.
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It's really interesting to read. It's makes you want to read MORE.(ImasjsbsnjWANTaksbsjsjdbeejsjbdMOREnamsjsnsbsjPLEASEakskskjsksjsjADDalksjsjsjshsnMOREkaksksbdjsksjsIsssssDONT have any thing else to say Why is it not posting???)
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Its a good book
OK I dropped this after chapter 50. I should dropped this earlier. Lot of unnecessary information, messy timeline, and plot.The author few times mixed up "she" and "he
It's a good novel. I enjoy it a lot and think that once it has more chapters, it'll be one of the bests on this site. It already has better grammar than most of the novels I've read so that's a plus. Other than that, the powers are cool and the Mc is rational but still shows that he's human. Overall, if we give it time to grow, the novel will be amazing. So for now, I'll give it 5 stars. I just hope author doesn't rush anything.
