No comments, this story is a recommendation for those of you who like family stories (especially brotherlove(?) ahem, cough-cough ?)Damian is so cute though! ??
I really love it I thought that it is a really good concept and the quality’s really good❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
The novel was great since from start, based on the story line and story construction.. It always left me with wanting and thinking of what will happen in the next chapters.. It deserves a five rating on my perspective..
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I liked the characters of this story.but i didn't really get your jokes. moreover, you've to reduce repeated events.otherwise, the style u right is too difficult so i guess that time and the difficulty was the reason you repeated such sentence.I look forward that you will use more lightning in next chapter.
Note: Updating Stability and World Background will be set to 5 stars since this is a review made when it was still a trial read.Writing Quality(4stars):It's pretty decent, haven't a lot of problems with itStory Development(4stars):Pretty good, I like the idea. The MC's phone cheat isn't uncommon, but I like how it's done. The plot is basically him raising a pet store, hopefully it stays that way unlike other pet store novels.Character Design(4stars):Characters aren't paper cut-outs, well at least from what I've read.
I would like to start by saying the story is great and what I mean by giving it such a low score on writing quality is not to criticize the author but rather the translator because this iS machine-translation quality with minimal editing, which is unfortunate as I would love to read more; however with such low quality translations, it is headache inducing to read.
The novel has just started and I am already strarting to love it and the writing doesn't have any major issues. Would recommend to people who monster/changing morals mc.
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This was a great idea for a story just badly implemented, there is hardly any good buildup in background or character growth feels kinda boring with no background, nothing done outside of the game in "RL". The Game doesn't really have any game elements as far as ive read.The Mc just finds everything and suddenly creates things out of nowhere. It's kinda like Mc is a wannabe Dr.Stone or whatever.overall it's just meh.
Very generic and low quality writing. Nothing to remember about. Nothing to recommend.
I've finished all 40 chapters and it's a good novel don't get me wrong at all but there is a ton of translation errors to the point sometimes I can't understand who's who not any world development for God sake earth is called blue planet and we learn nothing about his past life either kinda kills the story but if the translation errors were fixed I think this would be at least a 4.3