This novels is really nice and have good development. I also like how there are always some funny jokes in between every situation. Love the characters and books so far. Keep up the good work author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I am really enjoying it, and while I was in the middle of enjoying the novel locked chapters just had to ruin it, I can only read two chapters a day now by watching ads sadge
i am giving an honest review , i know you have got inspiration from other novels but in other novels it was not blunt as your novel 1st chapter , atleast there should be emotions and all , in the novel mc got pain and he said 'argh just like that half an hour pass .....
after 2nd flaw - when you write you suddenly changed the perspective like 1st to 3rd pov it so sudden that it becomes annoying ......like from 'I' to 'He' and after he suddenly become a serene and calm as he was not got to surreal pain at least there should be some emotions man , it's like blunt - yeah i got transmigration yeah ... is it real ..oh yeah ... and also this he also know he is an 'extra' what does extra means in this .....i got it means side character but what does it sudden i am extra then i will steal the hero things or artifacts etc.etc.....i got this it it's too blunt at least edit your 1st chapter to get proper reading atleast ..if you don't like my opinion you can delete it but yeah you should read first your 1st chapter in reader perspective or read other novel where you got inspired ...
This is good but just need to know how many chapters. I hope the author will continue writing this to the end. Thank you for a good intereting story.
this is almost the best book I've ever read just give the book a chance ?
I'm currently in the hospital because of almost dying and discovering this book was about the only good part
now the nurse is looking at me weird anyway about to get some morphine so ? goodnight
I'm on chapter 83 atm I don't have much to say but good things writing quality is top tier. Updates all the time Story is really good character design is top tier the world-building is good too only thing that would make the novel better is some lemons. ;]
The translator is a little lazy and the editor (if there is one) isn't pointing out the inconsistencies. A porcupine as a boar and even is called a boar at one point but is often called a porcupine... Lots of little things like that.The author doesn't seem to know what their doing at the start and just kind of dumps stuff on us without any clear goal. Gets better though as the author seems to figure out what their trying to do. By chapter 20 the story is mostly readable and is fairly enjoyable. I question the direction of the story and suspect many undesirable choices will be made in the stories development... but unless I see that I'm hopeful that it'll turn out to be a decent story though with WebNovel's track record that hope is questionable.
Regarding the title. 10 days is over 60+ chapters and only after the majority of the story turned in to modern day fantasy. Feels like a major bait and switch. Less said about the government "recruitment" the better.The secret organization asks him if he wants to join and he declines. So far so good. Only, an emergency way above his pay grade happens and he loses his choice and is drafted for the situation. this happens multiple times until the MC gives in. At least it is only for 10 days... Oh wait..
The story is great and all but i feel is that the protaganist of this story is a slave to the kingdom if i have his power i probably leave the kingdom and build a village so no one can force me to do anything specially the party man i hate party
Nice story, please add more teasing in erotic ways with harem characters . Loved the novel very much and i hope the harem wont be so big without characters development
Waiting for more chapters........ I think this is your 1st try. That's so nice. all the best for your next chapters.very excited to read more novels of you
This is one of the top books on the whole Webnovel. Judging the quality of the first forty chapters, it's comparable to "My senior brother is too steady". It would be a great loss if it won't be chosen