The storytelling is very amateurish, there's some blatant fan service and casual sexism, but at least the MC is smart and the system mechanics are interesting.
Reading up to chapter 36, I find the MC's rational decision making very refreshing. The game mechanic (where leveling up with soul energy sometimes rewards you with an item instead if there's excess) is creative in its own way.
However the storytelling itself is amateurish. Small fights that we know the MC or another character will win are described instead of cut, allowing the plot to progress faster. There's also a lot of repetitive descriptions of characters that should also be cut.
Tropes: Ice queen tsundere, a lot of hot blooded men, and OP dark lord MC himself. No arrogant young masters (yet).
Also, Lilith could totally be cut out of the beginning. She's only there for comedic relief, fanservice, and to inform the MC of "things he would figure out eventually."
Lastly, there is definitely some casual sexism, culture shocks, that people might not like.
Seriously, I'd been looking for something new and interesting and not overly done coz' I'd also been frustrated by how there are so many books with good concept but utterly poor and inconsistent in characters and storyline...just so many loopholes plus constant annoying attempts to make the mc so unique and unnecessarily op despite lacking in logic.
I've read LOTM and such so I'm kinda a strict reader when it comes to these kind of traits hehe. And I really wonder why this has not gone on the first place yet though I find it more technical and fun compared to the current top book.
All the best, Author-kun!!✨
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A surprisingly well-planned novel. I was reading through the comments of some Chinese carbon copy and happened upon a comment that said "Rating this 5 stars because at least it's better than my own story.", where I decided to take a look and ended up reading over 40 chapters before I even realized what was going on. Caught my attention at the unique setting and plot and dragged me through the story by the leash.
To the author, you shouldn't belittle yourself despite how good your story is. I have high expectations for you.
(Inb4 I'm thinking about a different author and clicked on the wrong profile. That'd be hella embarrassing LOL. Either way, this was a good read, and I'm planning to continue after I finish off some of my older stories.)
5 star for no westernizations. Webnovel, nationalism is still nationalism even if you change the country.
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Extremely bad book.
Read 19 chapters and its a sure drop book do not choose it.
I wasted time on it, and i rarely say so.
Maybe it's better after 30-40 or whatever chapter but you really can eat cactus, if you able to read until then.
I understand if the story is slow. But this is wrong advertised. It would be better to say that there is no system since it is very underutilized. It is said to be clan cultivation novel but I have not seen MC help anyone. There are multiple time skips but I don't feel any progress. It is different, but not "good" different. There have only been 20 chapters till this though.
zehahaha sounds interesting, anyone have the raw?
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Very interesting synopsis. I hope this one makes it through the list.
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Brilliant use of words in describing the character. It will be fun to see how the MC transforms from his miserable life and see him achieve his goals.
Keep up the good work, author
This story is a true work of art. The plot is very unique and different to the things I've read in the past. Anything can happen, so the readers are always at the edge of their seats. Great work Author!