The adjectives and phrases used for the translation is like it was translated using machine ai instead of a dedicated translator. It painful to read after going over it for a while.
Underated story, hope it picks up steam. The only problem I see is to many waifus to early. Maby kill 1 or 2 and then wait alot more to get some extra lovin. I really like it but at the same time can see how people wont like it. Try and make it a bit more realistic and take out a bit of the ***.
This story is unique and well written. The system is more than the general systems that you see in other novels, which is great for people who like to read system novels like myself and got tired of repeated novels in the same genre.
On a side note I agree with mrpixeltech on his remarks regarding the system's feedback, and my humble opinion regarding that is for our author to have a chapter at the beginning of the novel to be changed with the progress and a note in the author's thoughts to inform us of the update.
Looking forward to more chapters and alot of great ideas through the story.
Best wishes for a great novel.
So far this story draws you into the world its played off in, the author succeeds in making you feel the surroundings just as the protagonist does.
Apart from a few spelling mistakes here and there it still gets you gripped to the story, and whats happening so far doesn't give you any indication of what might happen, although there's a scene in the first chapter that gives you an idea of what to expect, war is no childsplay.
Another thing the author did was bring in a person from a foreign country to serve with the US Army, this is a reality as many foreigners do this to support their families back home, and hopefully through this novel, one might get an idea what these men go through to do so.
In only two chapters i started liking it, and am curious to see what happens.
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Just have to say that this book has definitive world building, solid back story, and an actually relatable character. not just some MC who always wins. It's a slow start. But it gets going fast. 10/10
SUBARASHI! ! . FUN TO READ ATLEAST GOT TO READ SOMETHING OUT OF THE NORM
I love the noob-to-pro-player type of genre! The pacing is slow but I still enjoy it tho (I actually want to see him get recruited to a team already but I also understand that he has to level up his skill play and his cards first)
I'm just going crazy about these plots ???
like the MC and the how the story developed.
Great. I don’t have much to say since I don’t particularly like this genre but the horror was abysmal to say. I know it’s quite non-existent in the first 60 chapters, but the detail is quite expressive. The only thing I find great imo is the character design. It’s impressive.
It's one of those trash cliche Chinese novels where every women is a goddess and every male is a douche bag I hope the novel gets dropped no original content just like "hey can I copy your homework?"
"Sure just change it a little bit so it doesn't look obvious"