Slowdown
A bad very bad novel, the worst mc ever, very overpowered cheat, don't read it absolutely, its irritating and a waste of time, bad world building and bad characters.
It may be dropped, its been some time till it got last updated..............................................................................
This is a masterpiece best system novel ever
This novel is definitely going to be op. Like just the background itself was amazing. And then the MC is obviously a little erratic but still intelligent. He might have went to the army or marines I believe so it shows he’s hard at work. But you can tell he’s charismatic and not your regular Mc who is very arrogant and gets angry because someone just and I quote “slap their face”. And his character build is clearly crazy op but everybody has the chance to makes their character built like that and not just Mc. Can’t wait to see where this novel goes.
Shameless Author Review. Please support my novel, thank you all in advance! I hope you like my novel, even though I still have a lot to learn but I hope you will continue to read the story.
I know its just been a chapter but the cover design is explicable as well as the title and the story design.I'm just waiting patiently for the real story.But for the beginning and effort, I have to rate it 5 stars, because it is not easy to write a nice novel.
Good luck!
This is the most engaging novel I have read here on Webnovel. Keep up the good work author, very well written action scenes and descriptions. Love the action and the adventure the MC takes on. [img=recommend]
MC has already shown low IQ levels. With such a super OP system, the only redeeming feature would be story and character interactions, but they are simply horrible. Skip this one.
The humble author is here
Tags of the novel
System , world building , adventure , romance , Domination , revenge , action .
Thank you all for giving this book a try .
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Author-san,
Good Job!
Just wanna boost rating, since there’s some unreasonable review out there.
Luv this story….....................................
I started reading this novel due to the daily updates notice, sadly I am dropping it now, while I tolerated a lot in the beginning hoping it would improve sadly it is still as mediocre as ever. 1-2d characters, near total lack of world building, zero romance, a plethora of spelling and word mistakes that makes it seem totally machine translated. In short I advise the author to learn as much as he can from his mistakes, get an editor, then rewrite the whole novel, if he ever wants to actually pick up enough support to finish it.
Amazing! I can't wait to ream the spin-offs and one-shots!! I loved this story so much that I even re-read it!! love you author and can't wait to see what you write next!!!
