For all those who do not know what language this is and cannot read, let them go to translations and translate from Serbian to English. I hope you like the story
Okay goodGo more updateI always support you.I suggest MC must be large brain hole for use the sistem. Not ***** MC. Not Willy development.
Me: ''Yoo brudda you have a lil rad story you got there, am lovin it and you know it!! but i lil bit of chapters would be SOO cool of ya bruh''
I like it! The synopsis is interesting and it really made me want to read it. The first chapter shows what is happening or what the story entails. I'm still annoyed at the guy who fudging killed him. Great story though! I can't see any grammatical errors. It's smooth to read and it's fun to read too!Great job author!
The setting is very interesting and what kept me reading, but the story can definately be better written. It is also slow paced. 6 chapters in nothing has happened yet other than constant explaining that he is suppossed to be a npc on a farm but is not. The writing quality seemed pretty *******ish
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This doesn't have NTR... Some stupid ***** ruined such a good novel's release rate.... **** you!If not for this, this novel would certainly have been the best in the whole of the web novel in this bloody site.
Hey, good-looking.Did I catch your attention now? Hopefully so, because I want to talk to you about this novel.With the 3 1/2 years I've been here, I have seen pretty much all of it. Good novel, bad novels, trash novels.This? This is a good one. Written like an epic, with a classical plot of the MC suffering with only his lovable (really, she is lovable) blood-related (no harem here folks) sister, and finally the pair of siblings were given the chance to rise up and carve out their own existence in the world.As of the other wonderful reviewers, have said, this has excellent world building, story-building that is never fast or slow, with the MC adequately and sufficently merciless to his enemies, but kind to others who supported him, and thebones that had never slighted him or his sister.tldr character summary: a reasonable, realistc character, and adorable, valiant, kind hearted sister that I envy with all my heart.I'll cut this short. Please do yourself a favor and try this. Read all the free chapters. If this didn't catch your eye like it did for me, I'm confident that at least, you'll agree that this is a good novel.Stay safe, readers.-MilordInk
it's a bad novel. The author probably didn't put in much thought and just wrote it for the chapters. there's no story, character development, the characters are all dumb, one dimensional.things just happen in the novel. heck the way the author makes it out to be is that if you know 1+1 you are a great mathematician.wouldn't recommend
make more chapters please ................
Yeah this story turned around quickly. It was a cool start, but with in 5 chapters the author made his MC cheat the system. He literally has over a few billion points from killing himself on the FIRST DAY. Even a god can't kill him and now he has a dungeon that instant creates things. What is the point of reading this novel now when the MC is on par with god.... well until the author decides to increase the power levels? Right now he can magically poof things into existence, he has complete control over new york and his sister has a mythical weapon. There is no point of reading this novel now when the t-ension is removed. I wished you didn't do this and had a weak to strong build up.
Author-san shameless 5-star review.If you are reading it before reading the novel, let me tell you a secret. "Normally, 95% of those people who like the novel don't review. 95% of those people who doesn't like the novel, review." So, if you are curious, give a try and see if you will like it by yourself ^^If you read the novel, please review it too ♥