First Love(BL)

Honestly, my biggest problem is the lack of basic spelling, and intentionally spelling **** wrong, admiral amurica, really? Just use the real ****, who cares, it's nothing but annoying and adds nothing. Literally tanks this book to the point from I want to read this until it finishes to I might drop it. Or spelling different as difernt. Use basic ms word or grammerly m8, or just go through paragraph comments, every one is outlined in them months ago, you can't take 1 day off writing new chapters to fix the rest? You could even do like a discord thing for future chapters with unedited chaps, where they can read there and tell you any errors, I've seen other books do it and improve significantly

I really wanted to like this novel... Novels about blacksmithing are my favorite.But i couldn't, i had to stop at chapter 17...The crafting chapters are perfect, it shows that the author cared and researched a lot about it.But the character interactions are so stupid and irrational that makes my head hurt.I really try to ignore all of that but omg i can't.Some situations are so stupid and forced that feel this story is written by a kid.I meant no disrespect, but this had to be said..

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This doesn't have NTR... Some stupid ***** ruined such a good novel's release rate.... **** you!If not for this, this novel would certainly have been the best in the whole of the web novel in this bloody site.

The author did mature in his writings! I must say he was already that good ? The story was well elaborated and it didn't confuse me a little bit. I can also sense that the story will get better and better. The author's growth will not stop so we are rest assured ? Just don't stop writing and all readers will be pleased! ?