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Hi All,
I wanted to reach out to express my sincerest apologies on not being able to finish my previous novel.
This will be an edited version of my previous work with a similar name. There were some parts that I were not happy with on the previous novel and i will work to fix these issues, and to continue with the story until the end.
Definitely not for those under 18 as the story progresses. The relationships are not going to be one dimensional where the relationships are just physical, so I'll try build them rather than protagonist banging thousands of people mindlessly. His harem will have interesting characters that are not often in others!
Enjoy
I’ve been seeing a couple of reviews bashing the mc for being to cautious or not having the demeanor of an immortal cultivation and my reply to that is people like that won’ last a second in the cultivation world where a father can kill his child for talent or a mother can sell her child for benefits and keep in mind the mc has the biggest benefit that any cultivator chases that is eternal life, so yes he will hide and take his time, yes he won’t have the demeanor of an immortal cultivator and yes he is for sure not going to get himself killed and refined into a pill just so he can prove he is a big boy that everyone needs to respect and eternal life makes you a hermit by default because all those you care about will die and live you alone so excuse the mc for just chilling in the prison.
Now for the proper review: the story is actua quite interesting and has an mc with a good head on his shoulder as well as a not so outrageous cheat which makes it all the more fun to read but the only problem I have with the story is the translation some words I have no idea what them mean because they are in Chinese and I just have to brush past it but I’ some chapters the translator provides the meaning at the end so that good…..well that’s the end of my review. Apologies if it is to amateur
i am giving it a 5 not because it's great, but because the reviews are overly harsh. As far as the "I'm Actually a Cultivaiton Bigshot" copies go, this is my favorite one, and I've read (and dropped) 4 others.
This book is so intriguing to read. A few misconceptions in the grammar but doesn't really affect the overall flow. Continue to do your best man!
Lastima , esta caido ? me estaba enganchando pero no seguire hasta q me asegure de que no esta caido .
I really like where the story is going so far, and hope the author doesn't ever drop!
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This is a story about a man who can literally bang himself. Or a woman who can bang herself. I would have been all over that as a teenager. World's highest quality "personal time".
This novel takes inspiration from tensura, not much and it is it's own interesting world, it has only two times when it takes something from tensura, that's the skill ranking (maybe) and the fact he starts with a skill that takes skills and other things, but that's all. It's so good, if you like tensura read this NOW, it's funny the story is good. I hope the author continues to write this.
Hello Author Here,I just wanted to let you all know this is a Reboot of The Novel Immortal Spiderman : Multiverse Traveller by author Nyxio, This story will majorly follow the storyline of those chapters at times but they only partially & the Novel will majorly focus on MCU x SpiderVerse, It is an AU of Earth - 1999999 which is MCU Earth & Will be a mix of everything you can read the synopsis for more & If you have any suggestions or recommendations you can tell them in the replies, Thankyou.[img=recommend]
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This is the second starbound fanfic i've ever read, and if you're tired of those wuxia, cultivator, and those narcissistic prick then i shall say this novel may be perfect for you. And don't worry if you not familiar with the lore or never play starbound before, the author kindly covered and explained it all (and chucklefish may gain another starbound player).
So far, The story is following the canon, with a bit spice of lore and interstellar conflict. And i can't be amazed of how underrated this novel is, i mean it's not everyday you can read sci-fi fanfic in this website.
But to be honest, starbound lore is full of hole, the overpowered personal warping and teleportation, the races background, device mechanism, and i hope the author explain the outpost in details, i mean a dimensional HUB is should be gigantic, sprawling cities, advanced ship in the port, armory of advanced tech, or maybe that's why they call it "outpost".
I think The author should add his own lore, or fill it with crossover or better yet maybe mods, i'm sure it will give him the idea to progress the story other than the canon. Other than that it's all good, just need a bit of realism. And i love this novel, hope you the best.
I don't mean to act bossy, and cocky. But if you found this review offending then please send me letter, i will apologize properly.
Amazing plot! It definitely gets better! It's the perfect combination of mystery and comedy.
Also, LOVE THE NEW COVER!!