Apolonchene06
This novel is seriously nice and original unlike some other novels I know. The idea for the plot, the synopsis and the world building was seriously top notch. I will put it into more simpler terms this novel is amazing. However, like every other novel, the author made some mistakes. And that is adding too much of descriptions and a few grammatical errors
Leaving a review, please don't mind me. I know nothing about this novel at all. Please enjoy your reading experience ..............................................................................
Such a great novel. It has the typical elements that all I Eat Tamatoes novels has (by far mostly good ones) so if you've liked the other novels by him you'll like this one. This one does have a unique element however as it's scy-fi cultivation which is much more refreshing and unique. Overall this is curently my favorite of his novels (tied with coiling dragon as that was the first novel I ever read).
WTH you pick AWE here, you bring it here and locked the chapter so each week we can only read 7 chapter???? are you kidding, go pick other ****ty novel, but don't ever lock AWE you will ruin this novel... GGRRRAHHH!!!
The quality of the translation after chapter 40 is mtl.
Paying just to read mtl, like why. cba to struggle to read this.
I was enjoying the story so far but 40 isn't enough to recommend.
Very good story, the pace is somehow better than RSSG (although they haven't found a real challenge yet), the characters are nice, I felt that the author got too attached to the original work which brings this work closer to a Fanfic than an Original Work, I expected to see more differentiation in terms of items and future directions than can happen but the author stopped writing (I hope he returns from the bottom of my heart)
Definitely a hidden gem. The characters are unique with their own special powers. The story is very comprehensive and the characters are very detailed, so the reader is left wondering about the end of the story. The author is currently editing her story, but I definitely recommend reading it. I'm really curious how it will look when the whole story is complete.
Dear author,
When reading your novel I feel really excited, you can put Witcher III : Wild Hunt element inside
I believe you will put more globalized game element again in the future chapters
I really look forward into it
I hope there is someone who use steel sword and silver sword together in this series
I just hope that author keeps updating the novel as all the other novel with ordinary protagonist are lost into oblivion[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Can someone explain the cultivation levels,author says 3 mortal earths 3 heavens 3 xiantian skies,in the chapter we see 0-10 levels then 1 grade ,i dont understand anything,author failed badly at explaining the cultivation levels in the novels.The note at the begining with cultivation levels should contain detailed explanation for reference,but in the first chapters all novels shoul;d have cultivation ranks introduced,author failed badly at it.
So far the greatest thing about this novel is... Honesty.. On what the author wants to see and the theme of the novel.
I mean. There is no diluting .. No like waste of time.
It's still what some may call cringe worthy but i don't care.
It's like a drawing of something good but.. i I mean the "technique" still has a lot space to develop.
Emm. Man don't worry about critiques.. the way to grow as a writer is to basically; actually write what you want to see.
But author. Keep it up.
If this is not the last thing you write. And your keep your words honest. You gonna improve. A lot. In the best.
Vet good novel
