Dropped cause nothing makes realy sense erverything is over exaggerated or other nonsensical stuff is happening
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The first chapters just terrible but it rapidly picks up after that. The premise of the storys a lot of fun as well presenting an unusual take on the dungeon core genre.
Honestly, I want to rate this 3 star but all those 5 star reviews reading it with high expectations and finding out that is just a decent novel with too much sparkling colour painted on top of it.Only reason why I rated it 2 star and not 1 star is because I try not to be biased unlike those flipping 5 star reviewers...While some of them are genuine, but most of them are straight bs.....
Oh my god, the translation quality is goddamn bad. I dont event know who is the retard one, author or the translator.The MC is fucking idot with a wife. When he ia having a wife, the author give him 3 potential new heroin, the other characters are split into 2 : 1. Really good people with honest personality2. Fucking retarded **** who think he is a godThe more idot thing is, he got skill book, poison master for "PRIESTS" and fucking revive for "KNIGHT". And in the next chapter, humanoid monster thiev class have poison skill on themAnd the most basic thing the mc should do, to add friend the studio owners after he got into the game, but he didn't, its coz the author want to make the mc look so awesome and give exaggerated comment on the mc when he reveal who he was in the gameOverall, this novel is so basic, the translation is shiet, but who i am to judge. I only can leave a review.
Writing Quality?-Since the writer is creating a Orginal Novel be wary of words being mixed up like "he" or "her". So just look at the rest of the sentence and you'll get the general idea. Also some parts when hes explaing some general infromation thats needed may seem like too much sometimes, however keep in mind its the authors passion showing through. Otherwise its pretty good qaulity.Stability of Updates?-So far no general hiccups. Keep in mind authors in the beginning may burn out. I dont want that here but its a reality.Story Development?-The author has done a great job of mixing both present information, future possiblites, and potential relationships that we as readers should keep in mind. Character Design?-The MC is develping slow and steady based off his upbringing and adventuring into the world. Nothing off putting like annyoing arrogance, cold blooded killing machine, pansy, however some people might not like the amount of romance introduced already. Keep in mind by Ch 72 theres 1 for sure harem member, 1 in the process but will take a lot of time to come around, and lastly 1 more that has her own interesting qualities. The MC isnt a pervert, but a young horny dude that wants to be with beautiful women if given the opportunity. While some novels create female leaders with no substance this one dosent. No close friends yet since most people his age are too weak.Lastly, while one of the tags say Overpowered its mainly because its still in the beginning and the author has givin the MC a strong foundation few can match in his current realm so there arent many strong enemies yet to match him so be patient if thats a issue.World Background?-Th author has done a good job contrasting his present situation, the plethora of galaxies out there, and how the MC will get there step by step. Not too much is given beyond the scope of his current realm as that isnt needed yet so sit back and enjoy the ride.That leaves 1 potentailly MAJOR issue for some readers.. why am I putting it way down here? Well its the MC raping a potential love interest (Not the one in the beginning) and while I would not read any novel that has rape there is one exception. Its where the MC is forced to have sex with a women after being given a power boost to offset the rapid rise. This situation if done right is where the MC feels remorse towards his actions and is willing to take responsibilty then I am letting it slide assuming it wont happen again. This novel is the execption. Others Ive read that do the same are "Ancient Godly Monarch" & "Chaotic Sword God". Both great novels that have a rape sence.If youve come this far get to it and read!!
Hello, I just wanted to everyone to give me their honest opinion, I just hope that this work would be able to impress some readers........
Not sure, how many Chapters, it says I've read, but I read it before it was on Qidan. It was one of my first before I knew of mainstream novels such as Desolate Era, Coiling Dragon, Stellar Transformations and etc. (Note, their author)During the time I read it, it was one of my favorites.(The bar was pretty low back then, as I didn't know the above novels)Story Development, Character Design and World Building are slightly reminiscent of Martial God Asura in repetitiveness.But, as long as they don't keep continuing, like Martial God Asura, and stop somewhere such as #### Stage, instead of finding a higher Realm and continuing the same thing as the beginning. They should be fine
It is a better version of legend of the perfect emperor that doesnt get dropped halfway through 3 times. its a reallyyyyyy good read and in no way get the recognition it deserves. i would put it with some of my favorite novels out there. Heres a quick summary. So basically the 18 yearold leader of rhe universe goes on an adventure because he board being a king. Has a good slice of life story, great world buiding so far (chapter 476) and Absolutely amazing character development. its an amazing novel and i 100% reccomend it. i really hope it gets the recognition it deserves in the future, maybe ever going as far as top 5 on the power stone rankings. overall a really enjoyable read.
what i am gonna say is that the novel is pretty stupid about giving the mc a golden finger cultivation technique. Like why the FUCK IS THERE A DIVINE WOODEN SWORD IN A LOW-CLASS SHITTY SCHOOL STORAGE.
My only complaint is the MC's almost dismissive attitude or lack of genuine respect towards his disciple. Xu Yan works diligently dedicating himself to Martial Arts cultivation so wholeheartedly, how could MC not feel guilty of bleeding him dry?? ? I feel bad for Xu Yan for having him as a master