Judging from the prologue this seems to be a interesting premise where her past is not as normal as it seen. The protagonist can be seen as not run of the mill type as she has a somewhat interesting and narcissistic mindset. There’s potential to be seen in the novel and hopefully the author will make it more intriguing
Just gonna say... Stacy be the real og, she a homie. 4.6 stars because I don't feel the story really progressed fast enough, at chap 35 nothing has changed a sufficient amount given its been 35 chaps. He still has the same 2 girls, same problems, nothing new since chap 1 (other than getting 2 of the 3 girls, of course).Other than story development being a little slow ? It's top notch ?Worthy of the 1st place it has ?
I enjoyed reading it.The mc is op and smart.try it and you will love it.............................................................................
First of all I want to preface this by saying I've only read to chapter 100 so I'm not sure if anything I complain about will be fixed later on. Lets start of by saying I don't think this is a bad novel. The writing quality is fantastic - the way author describes people, objects, emotions, or scenarios is detailed, everything is neatly organized and the system notifications are easy to read, and I haven't noticed any grammar mistakes.My issues with the novel aren't really general things that happen over and over, but for the most part are certain scenarios or plot points that I didn't like. For example: Leonel. I can stand him being a 'simp', in the beginning I thought it was pretty cool, in fact. But as I progressed through the chapters, we start seeing this unhealthy obsession he has with Aina that's there as part of his personality for whatever reason. I really don't understand the point of that. Another thing is the weird way he picks who he should feel sorry for when he has to kill people. I like when characters have a moral dilemma when it comes to murdering as it's only human to, however the dilemma in this story keeps popping back up even after you think he already resolved it. This is one of the many examples of the contradictory personalities some of these characters have.Adding to this issue of contradictions, Aina also has her fair share. This especially shows when the relationship between Aina and MC is seen. It goes from her giggling at him in one moment and in the next instant a week pass without them talking to each other for whatever reason. It's weird.Also since we're on the topic of Aina, I, for the love of god, can't think of any reason why she wouldn't say anything (or HELP ffs) when they were heading back to the base. She had an inkling at what would happen if they reached the fort, but instead of tell MC, she fake sleeps to heal a minor concussion - which should have been totally easy for her to heal being an evolved human with a freaking HEALING ability - while MC toils through a giant octopus, hordes of invalids, and a fort's army. In the end they still got fked up. It felt totally pointless.And that's another point - the pacing / progression is weird. We went from the Mayan temple, to a couple chapters walking around, to 30+ chapters in the Paris S-gate, to the Fort arc. They really only spent a day in the fort (after showing them everything they got and their uses, mind you), before getting items that will powerup MC, and then getting hunted smh. Like is that not sudden to anyone else lol?Im sure theres more annoying things but I can only remember minor things that might be explained later or just don't really matter in the story. They apparently knew that the Metamorphosis will occur but didn't prepare for it - why? And whats the deal with how Paradise Islands are set up - the poorer, the higher they are? That doesn't make sense at all, seems like that setting was only used in order for them to come crashing down later.Finally, the only other thing I had problem with is the lack of certain aspects of world building. Sure, the setting is pretty creative and when it is used its detailed, but at some parts, it's just skipped straight to the action. For example, the instances when MC and Aina were both at the fort - there was no solid explanation about the situation. We only learned there were innocents like that when they were dying when MC was trying to escape. We don't know what happened to MCs other classmates. Like are they being trained? Are they taking Force classes or whatever? Have they joined the army? Certain details that might seem pointless in the overall arching storyline but without it being added, it just seems very bland. Like as if the world only exists with MC, in a sense.I started this review when I was annoyed and sleepy lol. I just wanted to vent about the novel to whoever would listen so I apologize if my ramblings devolved during the later half of the review. I will say though that although this was mostly a negative review, I especially enjoyed the power system, and the action.
It was good, but at the beginning when Wang Li was going to Bai Hua Fairy Sect, I think there was a typo where Gu Qing Shan was mentioned at the Sky Palace competition. The MC said at the beginning he will "use the cheat he gets
Raw?? . । .
My only problem with this is the constant info dumping. One moment 2 people are talking to each other, then after the first 2 sentences, we get an explanation on how strong they are, how much universes they could destroy/trancendence, what law they have and thiers background that. I feel like you could introduce these slowly, like when they fight you could tell us the law they used or how powerful they're skill was.
Can you please upload faster? the wait is killing me. I'm sure you might be busy with other things but please.....upload faster I want to know who that guy on Titan is.
Will the mc continue to be a human? Because if not that would be interesting
Okay, first of all, almost all of the conflict so far has come from an unreasonable young master type, who has minimal justification for going after the MC. Second, it makes no sense that his [spectacle lord] was classified as [F-ranked]. Lol, what?All things considered, kinda bad.
How TF did this get picked over all the other decent ones in the trial? F**k you, Webnovel. Just f**k you. Absolutely no quality standard whatsoever.
I would give this novel a decent rating for the story but the word in the story need to increase.