electricpun2005
besides the switch personality of the MC, i really like when the MC is sociopathic and partially insane, I also love the story its one of the best ones I've seen on this website even tho the grammer may be bad somtimes, also the two authors are kind and wholesome people so please don't drop this you two.
The realms descriptions are very detailed, and the story is slightly more unique than usual, so overall it's a pretty enjoyable novel.
Idk how the trial reads work, but i hope this gets picked
I'm honestly enjoying it so much, the author has potential and his novel too, the romance between the girls and the mc is evolving in a healthy way so far, even though there are some warmer moments they are being used very well as a foundation for building from the girls' romance with mc, it's pretty cool to read, I'm enjoying where all this is leading, looking forward to meeting the new generation of the sect and also to see the older mc, hope when he gets older he won't be far away from mom for a long time as I'm loving her character so far and waiting for her personality to evolve with mc.
I'm looking forward to what's next: D
good to read. I give 5 stars, I want more chapters. good to read , 5 stars more chapters. reads Good, 5 stars more chapters. Good to read.. Remember I'm the God of war games I said it's good so it's good.
The story progression is good. Give it a try. I think most of the fantasy lovers will like the way it progresses.
Where is the system I don’ see it anyw
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The Storyline is fascinating to an extent that grabs readers attention. Beautiful pictures are drawn through these words. Overall a good novel.
Definitely worth a read! An epic blend of history and science fiction!..The narration and plot development is very engaging and addictive….Mind-blowing plot with a much deepened mystery after each chapter! [img=update][img=update]
Whoa. Complex characters and backgrounds. A really well thought out setting too. I almost got too lost in the world.
This is going to turn out really well, I can tell. Keep up the good work!
It's a great cultivation novel, with promising Storyline.
The author should consider using adequate paragraphing, by writing different conversations on different lines.
I pay my respect for the perseverance of the dude that did the petition, I saw him everywhere I turned on WN.
so congratulations for a wishe granted
i really liked the story,grammar can improve significantly,but it is understandable to enjoy,my biggest issue with this story is i you haven't used "" when characters speak which makes it a problem when reading
