Based on the first 40 chapters, I approve of this novel. At times I am not too sure though, it's still too early to say how it pans out. But MC behavior/personality suits my tastes, things are not overly complicated, the simplicity isn't boring or repetitive. I'll maybe check MTL and see how it goes later on.
From chapter 8, I cannot stop laughing when Anastasia called Alfred baka but he knows it?. Their interaction is cute, but when Anatasia tells about the ringleader ok I am getting nervous too. This story is interesting, the background of the story is clear enough, so far I enjoy reading this and please keep updating your story!???
foe the first few chapters it was a decent red so far, but then in chapter 18 the author is tarting to b.s. his way to convince the readers that mc is just normal tier and not op yet. author is looking for ways to nerf mc.at stats 400 he can already massacre c+ like they are insects, but then came the author trying to nerf mc saying mc still at peak body cultivation at the 1000 stats when he is at 5000+. but we have the c+ croc monster saying no martial artist could ever be that strong, not even the strongest in history since martial arts are now outdated because they can't strengthen beyond c rank. anyway up to you guys to read this... I just hate it when author pull this kind of b.s.
A typical world with potals and invading creatures. That's not really interesting. Nor is the system the MC has. The plot itself is reasonably interesting though. Grammar is DOGSHIT. Not really smooth to read. Got some mixed feelings about this one. There are certainly better novels of this setting and genre like "World's Best Martial Artist"
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Muito bom, gostei muito da leitura e por isso eu agradeço imensamente. É uma pena que está parado ou cancelado. Gostaria de ver o final desse Romance. Acredito que possa ser um dos melhores que já li.
Obrigado novamente!
I don't understand half of what I'm reading, its too cryptic. It's a mix of old English and wrong statements I don't understand. Translator should work on the grammar
Very interesting story with amazing characters, love the story so far can't wait to find out what will happen when she finally exposes her true identity as fu jiu and spade z this is one of the best stories I have read so far I really really love it sooo sooo cute
Not sure if the story is any good since i cant get it past myself to read things that have bad grammar. Its not the novel itself...its just that its hard to focus on reading when the novel has bad grammar
It doeant even have to be the best
It just has to be good
I am big fan of naruto all manga and all the tv show anime of naruto, boruto is also very good and the movies. I also love naruto fan novel, this is very good so far. please dont stop. its amazing now. Keep it up friend
Author's friend here. So i'm going to give it five stars.
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this story is great trust me bros the start is a bit slow but it picks up pace real good so don't worry also remember throw your powerstones at nyat