This is an updated review after reading 60 chapters,
Previously i felt the MC stupid for focusing on subclass as i believed it was a bad investment,
But thankfully the mc did change and has now focused more on becoming stronger(not as much as i want but good enough for now),
Considering the mc situation ill say his choices weren’t too bad(can’t expect him to be smart from the get go i suppose),
Although i still don’t like trickster/disguiser path as i dont like cheap tricks and prefer frontal battle where you simply crush and dominate your enemies,
But thats just an opinion and i like that the mc started to slowly focus on his main occupation (although ill still say he could be much stronger if he learns how to grind exp)
anyway the story is going in a good direction at the moment,
hopefully the mc keeps on his path and doesn’t become a goody two shoes self sacrificing selfless hero as i already have a phobia from these types of dense stupid MC’s( so far the NC has shown no signs whatsover that he will follow that crazy path thankfully)
Anyway good luck author I’ll Follow this story(occasionally ill give comments, i only give comments when im annoyed by the mc or a lead character, i cant help myself sometimes to rant whenever the mc makes a choice contrary to what i believe is a better choice and so it’s probably often,,,)
Anyway thanks for reading my lenthy unobstructive review.
Sorry for writing a review that is more of an opinion than a proper review.
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This one is creatively done. It is obvious that the author put their love and care to this. It wasn’t laugh out loud funny and I noticed the author was trying their best to make up jokes, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. I like all the characters for the time being, they have this real aura attached to them, the novel is a Slice of Life after all and I expected them to be that way. SoL is my cup of tea but I can’t speak for everyone. Keep it up, I’ll be waiting for more.
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Writting grammar is good. Easy to readStory starts out with presenting a plot for a fight for survival story with lots of power leveling arcs, and is instead a "im stronk tkme for slice of life" story. So do note its not what is advertised, it is pretty good though as slice of life in a not really poat apocalypse. The characters have honeatly gained access to amenities and other rhings far too easily.The big time skips honestly dont do the story any favors. Plenty of content to be had during those time points. Its honestly a shame the author didnt take the time to craft it out.Characters are noraml. Nothing really aticks out positively or negatively.World background is a slightly different take on an apocalypse wifh magic and monsters but doesnt really delve into it at all.Overall Id rate it a 6/10. Very average.Really needs a more thorough story board. As well, it also needs more fleshed out content. Time skips are not replacements to good plot.
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I haven't read it yet and I'm only giving a review to ask the author what the tags are... hi author I hope you can answer my question... I'm only giving a review this long due to the word lower limit
I am really interested in reading more of this story, to have an established protaganist is a change from the recent sign up system stories that are currently in vogue right now.
This is quite interesting, the main character is abandoned and becomes a coach. Hopefully he can return to being a professional player, and show that the owner's decision was wrong.
I'm loving this book so far.
good to read. I want more chapters I give 5 stars for more chapters. give me more chapters... 5 stars for more chapters. I want them.. I need them.. more chapters.
The strength of this story is its good characterization. When the potato chip girl appeared, I didn't expect it to be so well written. I thought she would just be an insignificant supporting role. The writer is very good at making good characterizations with minimal background characters.