HelCatNY9
First of all you have an awesome vocabulary and very different writing style. The plot itself is very different which caught my interest from the very first chapter and I love the attitude of the main character.
Usually I try to give stories at least 100 chapters before giving up, however this story is an exception to the rule. Ppl said its much better later on, but I wish I could continue on. the beginning chapters are absolutely horrendous.
The mc is not likeable, his actions make no sense. chapter 39 and being late is a perfect example.
His friends are beyond annoying. with friends like that, who needs enemies.
The world situation and humanity losing and dying, yet young masters can just go kill new recruits or whatever.... makes no sense.
The system just sucks. It pretty much states, you continue swimming against the current or you die. I hate forced systems.
The mc takes simp to the next lvl in beginning. that's the whole premise of the beginning and why he does things.
finished reading this just now, 700+ chapters. and then it basically compressed maybe a few hundred chapters in a single chapter just to finish the novel. what a disappointment.
A quality work. I never got bored while reading. There was no problem except for a few errors. I definitely recommend reading it. I can't wait to see the end of the adventure.
Good Read! I loved it! Goodgood goodgoodgooodoyifodithdhuwhwhshsjehdbdhvevfvdbbsbrbbdhsjejdjhdbsrhdhbsbdbbdbsbsvffjdi love it fantasix absolute incrrdiclbr ridhbtnskzbdbndly
Fantastic. Great pace of advancement in the beginning, i hope it will continue and not begin to slow down like some authors. Fantastic writing style and well explored cultivation system. A rare gem. great job author
Interesting work. Very unfortunate that the grammar is average, but nonetheless I will watch this book with great interest.
This novel has its ups and downs but it's definitely worth a read. I definitely highly recommend giving it a try. The only warning is that ita harem. So yeah.
The story is good . .. .. the plot is also great . .. .but just one request , start powering up the mc . .. .. keep it up and PLEASE DON'T DROP.
Complete garbage I wouldn't recommend to anyone. The plot progresses like the writer wrote this in an examination room and just adds whatever idea that pops up in his head. The character development sucks I have yet to get a clear image of any of main characters. Certain actions /events don't connect well with the entire plot line either that or the author just forgot about that all together. All in all one star is being super generous. Don't waste your time
I rewrote this novel due to an unspeakable reason. While I'm sorry to the irresponsible action in the past month, but I could only do this. But well, I'm coming back baby, I didn't care if any of you still remember this novel or even still care about it, but here I am.
I must the first chapter is an original way to start out the novel. However, I must say it really picks up later. So, I must say that both his sister and mother better be in the harem. Heh, I especially love the cute scenes between the MC and the sister. Good ole’ booty spanking for punishment. Heheheee. I also hope that she is his first time to be honest. I also wish that the girls actually stay relevant throughout the story and not a vase. Like, make them useful for the MC if you get what I’m saying. Anyways, I do hope the author finishes this novel since I get the feeling that this novel will quite good if the author keeps up with the good work so far. (Only on chapter 6 so far)
Go team Xiao Che and Xiao Tan!!!! Also, I think the harem should be around 10 girls give or take. Heh, whatever is fine to be honest. Just make the girls stay relevant.
Anyways, keep up the good work author!
