This is a very fun idea I hope this one gets picked up the builder system type story's mostly get dropped this one seems interesting. I won't this one to be picked ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
another mtl with almost no editing. just reading the first Chapter they already mixed up Her and His. -- Other then the Translation Quality i am enjoy this novel :)
would be a lot better if it didn't just repeat the same obvious information over and over again, these first forty chapters could have been 20
Very good plotline, and nicely written! Thinking of reading other projects of the author. Come on folk, what are you waiting for, go and read it.
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The words and sentences are written are clear and understandable. The story itself carries out a well-developed plot that arouses the curiosity of the readers.
It feels really good to read a story like this.
and after a long while, I feel like I want a spoiler about what's going to happen next.
I cant wait to see the next chapter.
Author, you are so talented. please write more and more in the future.
It´s an interesting and fun story that catches the reader off guard. I enjoyed the twists and turns the arc offers. Just when you think you know what might happen next, the author tends to surprise you with vivid details that keep you wanting more.
It's a good novel and has potential, it'll be better if the author could at least improve the grammar and how the story flows, at least be at a decent paced-story which would be good, longer chapter's (Just yes), and author should at least get himself a schedule to update the novel (like 1 chapter per day, 5 chapter's per week). Overall, a decent read if the quality could steadily increase bit by bit. [img=recommend]