Not sure the description and the actual story match. From what I know MC is an orphan who died and reincarnated into a world that reincarnates people. If you successfully reincarnate you can go back to this world and be rich and stuff like that.⚠️ This, I’m about to type may or may not be spoilers, it depends on the type of person you are so proceed with caution! But you can teleport yourself to the end when I so very nicely explain how different it is from the description ⚠️——————————MC - Transmigrated Into Lin Qi a smart top student in this reincarnation world. When he transmigrates, he’s standing in front of the reincarnation tower getting ready to be reincarnated, while it’s happening, some dog blood drama happens an enemy shows up and a possible FL also shows up, yadda yadda, so he finally gets inside the reincarnation tube THEN obtained the system and gets reincarnated. The world he’s reincarnated to is just like ours now, but it has some ancient martial arts, the mystical martial arts, all that jazz.MC, reincarnates into someone that looks like him, but has a sad life, he asks the system what it can do, the system said it can upgrade him to the top most level, and we figure out later at the cost of lifespan. So the MC finds ways to learn martial art and succeeded, gained an cultivation manual made a big scene and levelled up to Land Immortal, and immediately went to get revenge, after.He finds the FL and Villain, they all have the same destination, or whatever, MC gets back at the Villain and helps FL or whatever and keeps pondering if there is anything after land immortal and wants to stay invincible. Basically a whole short story, the author could realistically cut it off around her, anyway this is all happens in 22 chapters and I’m as far as that….—————————Momentarily, when im into stories I like going back to read the description, so I did that for this one, and seen it’s so much different from what I was reading.What world of immortal, what demons, what ancient gods, what sects, what doesn’t have any cultivation talent and is about to die but then obtains a system. Nothing like that happens where I am so for, and I feel it won’t happen later either, and it wouldn’t make sense to unless the MC lost all memories.The system did not awaken as he was about to die of old age, it awakens when he’s in a reincarnation tube, about to get reincarnated.If you came because you thought the description sounded cool, then try something else, unless you feel what I described up top is cool then continue reading. I will update if I see it changes to how the description describes it to be.
Wonderful attempt at writing a story i love the characters and the world background i hope you keep this up
His thoughts flowed well and moved the book along very quickly. lio's narrative is wonderful ?
I'm re-editing this book with all the published chapters before I add more; the following chapters come in a few weeks from now.
Marriageable age for female on ancient chinese is 14 y o, n male is 16 y o. Especially on noble famillies, they even betrothed their daugther from young age, even when she was a baby. Meanwhile the boy will interract with their future wife even since she was a super young girl, kinda like dating phase. hence telling the main male lead Pedhopile only because he is fall in lov to a 13 yo girl is kinda wrong i think, as the girl is already at appropriate age to be admired at that time.
good book ......
Dear Sakshi when are you going to start the new novel. Very excited yikes!!!!
Great! Next part please
great and excellent read, I read non-stop till the end,love it
All Updates are appreciated. Thank you for giving us great chapters everyday
Good story, but grammar is not great. Getting very hard to read.
Five stars