Narration is too good, character development of each one is awesome. Can't wait to read the upcoming chapters. Looking forward for the character developments and more good story arcs.
Keep on doing the good work author??good stuff ?? the matches exciting and they appear pretty good in mind and it's engaging. Impatiently awaiting your next update?
It starts out a bit rough but it gets better later on.You will miss out if you don't read until at least page 20.The only things I wish for are better grammar and more chapters.And author I know you are thinking of adding NTR, but please, please don't. I and probably many others will drop this then.Thank you author for making this masterpiece.SPOILER AHEADAuthor, please make the MC create a tentacle monster he can control, hehe, and maybe some kinky scenes. Hehe
the story is already amazing at the beginning.keep at it ????
"Or ... The assistant will have fun with you Doc--"
"Holla, what a cute boy." He come near to me and his face right front of me now. "We gonna have fun kiddo."
A thundershower still poured down outside the car with black clouds covering the sky, making it seem like it was night right now. Shi Jieyi also woke up from the aftereffects if the orgasm gradually. The events which had happened played like a movie flick before her eyes. She noticed Lin Tianlong gaze upon her breasts lustfully and also felt the pathway of her valley expand to its utmost due to his huge member. An electrifying limp pleasure made her moan out, making her raise her hand and place it on his chest while her valley had begun to slowly wriggle by itself. It sucked onto the glans of his huge member and the nectar which had run out had started brewing up again.
"Izuku-kun! Over here!" Izuku ran over to Ochaco and accidentally tripped and knocked into one of the gangsters. One of them said "Who the hell are you? Watch where your going! What? You want a beating?" Ochaco came over "Are you okay Izuku-kun!?" Ochaco helped him up "y-yeah, I'm okay" He looked up to the gangster "Your a middle school kid, right? Get the fuck outta here before the rest of my crew get here. I've given you a chance to run. Take it. Your lucky, I won't give you a chance next time"
[Yes?]
She blinked at him, her face flashing her usual color. "What do you mean?" She asked with an eyebrow raised and acting completely innocent.
Only shooting stars break the mold
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