I'm starting a wonderful journey, this is just a review for a mind blowing synopsis. Another review will come after the initial reading. ????????????
A dash of comedy and a splash of crazy. This book has wonderful potential. Keep up the good work.
Love this book. I'm a big fan of hot kickass female warriors - who isn't? Fast-paced action battling mutant beasts that were created as weapons in WW3 and have run wild. Interspersed with smoot smoot and some hilarious honey trap scenes. Keep up the pace author.
I'm tired of generic novels and so far this hasn't disappointed.
Hi From Necrobin and story is for ME, I like it.
Very good start. So far the characters are pretty human feeling and have a decent framework for future development with their flaws and interactions. I also am very much liking the cute slice of life moments that this has primarily been so far. Always can use more cute slice of life. :) There isn’t really any major flaws that I can see so far and overall the writing quality seems pretty good but we shall see if that continues throughout the story as it progresses. There is only one thing that I think might be relevant to critique about so far and that is that Cali seems to not be very curious about her new abilities and features. If I could suddenly fluently read kanji out of nowhere I would be immediately checking if I could read any language or if there was some sort of pattern or restrictions on that ability. Also what about different coding languages? They are essentially the same thing as normal languages just structured in a way that makes it easier to interact with computers. What about sign language? Etc… I think you get what I mean.Also what about her eyes? Did they change to give her that retro reflective effect on the inside of her pupils for night vision? And how are her habits changing? I would 100% recommend having her start writing a journal and document these types of changes and her thoughts on them.Thanks for writing this, you’re doing great. :)
really like rebirth theme and this is one of the best I've read
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
the book is a good book . you can do better though
Wow, this is one of the best fantasy Novel I have read so far.I love the imagery! The the questions of mystery of world.The introduction is just so captivating.I would love to read more and more of this actually
Did the author forget to write chapters for this story?
The character and writing quality are quite good.The world background still needs a bit.mc still needs some development and it's better to get him accepted