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The story is good, it's worth your time getting invested in it. Tongue-in-cheek first-person protagonist, dystopian urban setting and sci-fi elements.Proof: Trust me bro
This story is very compelling but I have this urge to help the author with his grammar or at least help him proofread this story!This is a great novel but it would be much better with a little more touch of grammatical sense. Author if you’re reading this review, I will 100% proofread your story and fix any grammar errors. If you need extra hands, I’ll bring my buddies over to help!
the novel characteristic are heavily on a game mechanic rather than a reality mechanic so u can expect 'all u can do mc' without proper progress battle experience and reason
This novel is bland. I don't like any of the characters personalities present at all. The way people are reacting and communicating is disappointing as well. I was intrigued at the start of the novel since it's somewhat similar to Overlord. Once they reached the tavern that's when I started disliking the story. You could have done some world building, develop their personalities,or push us to in the direction that this is a real world and not some game. From what I seen is a novel that makes no sense. The emotions and the reactions of the MC feel forced and cringy. Once they started the dungeon the story just turned to hell due to the revive function and vampires. Sorry but If your just going to make the MC some powerhouse with slaves and have a revive function then story is not going to go far unless you want to make a average novel that's filled with readers that praise your novel for having an OP character with a harem. If you want to improve as an author you need to compare the emotions and world building of your work with great novels that are similar to the genre of yours.
very good story, draws you you realate to the chars, read it all in 2 days was sad there was not more :( would highly recommend this to any lit rpg lover any day
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Want to finally get more of this book. Pretty please?Or i need to wait months to wait for another one i like to show up.......................
the synopsis is well written so it must to add to my collection. it tells us about the MC who has many weaknesses. I'm curious what power will the MC get?
Let's see how that ***** shweta brags now huh. Absolutely loving this novel, hopefully you can go all out in production after your exams thanks for the great story
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Flynn was a unique well established MC there is. He is great, just like the rest of the characters. Normally I don't like Gaming world novels but this one hooked me up right from the first chapter. Binge read this gem and you won't regret it.