I'm on 25th chapter so far and i still don't know what tf is happening ! !!
Hey guys, I decided to write another review. Well, the book didn't live up to expectations like I expected in it's first 3 months. I'm at fault for that, I dragged the system reveal for far too long and for that I'm sorry. Ok, here's the proper review
Writing Quality: It's not perfect but I tried my best to make it as smooth as possible
Story Development: I think I at least did above average in this aspect, I paid a lot of attention to the story, storyline, and power ranking before starting it.
Character Design: Not perfect but I tried to make each character as unique as possible.
Updating Stability: Pretty stable, as of now, 16 chapters per week.
World Background: I tried my best to make it not too complicated while still trying hard to restrain myself from hitting.
Well, that's my review. No matter what though, deciding to read this book is your choice, I hope you do though and as for my readers, thanks for reading.
If you're picking this book. Do know that there is a lot of show-not-tell moment. Keep in mind, if the protagonist is talking to something, someone, or himself, he will, and always put on a smile.
This detail is rarely mentioned by him narrating it, but the cues throughout the story hinted it, and the people around him will sometimes mention it in their dialog.
That took me a moment to notice on first few chapters. Hope this will elevate the experience of whoever as clueless as I do at first read. If not, it is a fun detail to mention imo.
Basically, the mc is one smug little basta-
The book is a continuation witch seems to be just as good as the first book, however I would like to see more interesting situations happen in this new book.
Furthermore I hope that references will be made between the two books as both series continue as it would be cool for the fans to see those.
But overall I’m really looking forward to this book as it seems to have lots of potential to be even better than the first book up to the point that I have read for each of them.
Thanks for the series/chapter :) ~E
I loved how the book started off with a dream, the comedy is good and the writing style is easy to understand, I never read books like these but trust me this book captured my attention, great work, looking forward to more chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Don't know whom should I point my finger on, the guy who posted this work(which is a complete copy of beautiful CEO) or the WN staff who contracted this novel.
Beginning was good. But dropped the novel at chapter 20. Synopsis of the novel is not clear about the gender issue of MC. What a waste of good writing quality.
Good story but greedy author and app developers, it costs 2 fast pass per locked chapter or starts out at 15 coins then increases every chapter afterwards not sure what they are thinking. So many translation errors in grammar and gender nouns it is annoying. suggest making all locked chapters a set price of 10 coins per developers need to give coin rewards as check in, reading etc. if you want a free reading app go to my topia
The writing style of the author is kinda jarring, the sentences don't flow and there are times where I need to reread a sentence. It disturbs my reading immersion and just lowers the quality of the novel. Idk about you guys but the grammar and just the way an author writes sentences plays a big part in my reading experience, hence why I rated this low. I'm also rating this lower just to balance the rating of the novel since I've noticed that most of the reviews aren't proper reviews at all.
Amazing piece of work. Impressive writing aesthetics. Being a passionate author, I grew interested in the main character(Korede Balogun) dependency on his intellects despite his super human-like abilities, i can't wait for him to awaken giant within.
I want more updates this story is amazing and so is your other one. I just wish to have good updates so we can read it a lot more please.
for everyone complaining about the word "fairy" being used, download this chrome extension, https://chrome.google.com/webstore/detail/search-and-replace/bldchfkhmnkoimaciljpilanilmbnofo, and replace the word fairy with immortal or cultivation. It isn't perfect but it works