Your story was great but I have to tell you listen to your heart and not what people say, it will only lead to regrets. I love your book even though I hated the fact that All had *** with Rena, Camellia,etc. I wanted that to happen btw him and Elizabeth only.but it's still nice. Pls don't ever give up on writing ur novels even though it seems no one is interested in reading them. U may not notice but there were a lot of ghost reader who loved ur novel and was dieing to get an update, someone like me. I don't really like leaving comments but I love your book.l hope you read this message and try not to feel inferior.love you author!!
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Greetings to the author!
So your synopsis was what got me at first. And after that the way the you can easily sperater the characters by their personality is amazing. I hope it doesn't end here.
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From an objective standpoint, this is a pretty good novel. MC is a transmigrator who put all of his talent into strength, so he has the abIlity to go strong. Only issue would be the ever present Chinese nationalism. It's not too much, but annoying.
From an personal point of view I'm disappointed.
*spoiler from having read raws up to chapter 71*
I thought that this would become a novel where the MC doesn't trust the military and slowly gets power and manages to slowly unravel the mysteries in his brother's death. Instead, he casually walks into the military base and with the help of his teacher and other military members, he manages to get a copy of the recordings of his brother's death. He finds out what's wrong in one night and then hands the data he found out back to the higher ups in the military.
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I liked the story pretty much. The mc development is actually quite good.I lowkey like how the story is advancing.
Although there is always room for improvement
I noticed this only need one more reviews before it can have a rating so why not.
I means, this is a good Apocalypse story.
So here, the 10th reviews from me.
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Typical Cultivation and Transmigration Novel. Started off fine, but MC is still referred to as Andy. I dont care that was his previous worlds name and he doesnt feel like he belongs in this world. If the setting has only chinese names, adapt your MC to have a chinese name. If he wanted to pay homage to his name Andy here is a good name for you to use. An Di. Faking his suicide and adapting a new name is a good plot point. Since he doesnt want to be around that clan its good to be out on his own as he knows the story and its plot. But seriously to use an English name and no one thinks that it isnt weird?Had to drop because the name Andy was in nearly every paragraph each chapter. Very hard to get into a story that is supposed to be Chinese Cultivation but somehow isnt due to a single word.
The mc starts of strong, pragmatic and grounded. Then he gets a fairy guide and turns into a weak, scatterbrained moron.I liked the initial 25 or so chapters of the story, but with the complete 180 in personality and competence, it began to just grind on my nerves.It showed in the fights of chapter 28 and 29, then with him going from a hoarder on the avarage skyrim player level in chapter to some moron at chapter 30 who doesn't want to pick up loot because he doesn't use those items... When he's carrying a back full of junk items to sell... And needing his fairy guide to point out the obvious in a ridiculing manner, I dropped It.The way I see it, it's like two people worked on this story, the first 25 chapters or so were by a person who liked to write a competent story but lost interest.And the second by a person who had a total thing for the usual incompetant characters who need minders to tell their left hand from their right, along with tropes and clichés.Its like seeing a high rated Litrpg novel start, only to have some weebo wanting it into some kind of mix wuxia / harem anime hybrid.Perhaps the story was written by copy pasting events from other novels, then having the patchwork rewritten as one thing to make it a whole, without keeping the character and his personality in mind.That's not a bad way to write a new story, after all originality these days is just well stolen concepts applied in uncommon ways, but the loss of sight of the character's original engaging personality causing it to be exchanged for a moron with an overbearing fairy who needs to hold his hand lest he trips over his own feet is not cool.I think I would be much more interested in the story if the MC was more consistent in his character.