yes i read all 30 chapters so I like it there are some grammer problemb but it can mades i like it
you can like it so i guess and the othere novel check it out to
Easy 5 star fot this novel
If you want lots of snu snu, harem, some plot, a lot of PLOT then this is for you
Update stability is really good that i can say after 100 chapter
So dont wait and jump in onto the ship
Okay first off, this novel is amazing. I love the way the plot has developed and everything. Second, there is animated video called the court jester animated by Alpas[The 7th end] and it's scarily similar to this in the story it tells, and its really cool.
Let's start with your writing quality. Maybe my standards are too high, but your sentences are too long (some parts are honestly unnecessary) and some phrases are misplaced. I suggest you read about grammar rules on misplaced modifiers. You should also edit your usage of punctuations, so you can seperate your long sentences better. You're also somehow using some words wrongly.
For example in first chapter:
"Is that anyway to talk to me? I remind you that without me you would be nothing!"
You can rewrite it as:
"Is that how you're supposed to talk to me? Let me remind you, you would be nothing without me!"
There are more errors, but I'll move on to the next.
Story Development. The reason why he died is because he wanted to end the contract. So they blackmail him, then they kill him and the reason is too shallow-- he wanted to end the contract. Since this is under realistic fiction, he will only be blacklisted at most or more blackmail will be used. To make it better, why don't you add more enmity for the main lead. You also didn't mention how he adjusted and stuff.
Character design. It's a bit confusing to read since the personality of other's aren't that distinct. But it's okay. World Background. It's somehow clear. Overall, it's good.
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It was an absolutely gut-wrenching story. Every twist hurt more than the last, and you won't really get HOW much it hurts till you read the ending chapter.
Everything is miserable in the most well-written way and as a person who pretty much lives for angst, I live for this.
Legitimately, I forgot that this app even existed till I remembered this book. Tbh the only reason I keep coming back to Webnovel is FOR this author's works.
Thanks a lot for bringing us this masterpiece man. I'm not even going through the same thing as the MC is but it's still comforting somehow.
Though the beginning parts might have been a bit cliche, I can't even imagine how it went from that point to where it is now. Man, I love this book
the mc is so irritating to me i cant take it anymore im gonna drop it for now and maybe pick it back up few months laters for a second chance to me.. and i hate that he swears too much.
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i am really missing its chapter . Hope its mass releases.
I liked this web novel very much. Please come fast.
I liked everything about this novel very much.
I am the ruler of the heavens and all realms. I came to the earth unintentionally. After seeing the talents of the earth, I felt that the earth has potential. So when I left, I created 500 sets of systems like in the novels you read. , As long as like and reply 1, you can get the supreme system, and you don’t lose money. Don’t wait for the time to regret. So, what are you waiting for?