The start of this book was amazing, but you should clean up the rambling, major plot holes (transition the story vs an author explanation), and grammar. Half way it seems you may have lost interest in writing it. This book has potential and could easily become publishing material -Anonymous Editor
You can't tired of any book from Karima. She will make you looking for more. Very well written story.
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loved this book, couldn't put it down!
I really enjoy this book cant wait to read more of it.
This story is fantastic! I love it! ❤️
I can’t wait for more chapters to this book. It’s really getting good. I hope it’s updated really soon really soon explaining what happened.
This is such a nice book, thrilling and entertaining. I enjoyed every bit of it
This story is so fascinating, reading the story knowing the complicated relation between Mago Concepcion a ruthless, seductive and incapable of love. Arlene Mejorada she was willing to give everything to him just to love her back until she was broken to pieces. This is so interesting to read althoug
wow,I love this novel so much
This is amazing
This is a beautiful story about love, heartbreak and forgiveness. I was glued to the story from beginning to end. I couldn't stop reading. Kudos to the author on an amazing well written story..........