Nice nice a smart scheming merciless sly demon act protagonist that possessed advance overpowering future knowledge in his arsenal.
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The only things I wanted to point out are already written in previous reviews, and in addition I've mentioned it in the comment. Aside from that, the plot is really good and light hearted. I really liked the happy happy workplace setting. It feels like a joint family tbh. The characters are well described and there are negligible grammatical mistakes. The events are described very elaborately which a good thing, but it can get tiring if it's not even related to the main plot. Otherwise, the story is pretty cool^^[img=recommend]
this is captivating the the chapters always better than the last.
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This story is nothing but kissing, licking, and touching. You will get bored very quickly in the early 30 chapters...I mean very very boring
Pleaseeeee updateeeeee ??The raw has 2000+ chapters, the TL is still 81+ chapters, please update ??Jdidiidbs fbdjfudud dhdhudud dd d dd d dd d d g g e s f
This novel has a good story and characters development however the non-premium chapters badly need editting. I unlocked the first premium chapter to check and it's easily more readable than the non-premium chapters I have read so far (chapter 25). The problem is the grammar and sentence structure are terrible. It's almost like every word in a sentence has been placed in a random order before moving onto the next sentence and repeating the same thing.
Don't get me wrong, it's possible to read however I found that I was having headaches trying to read it. Everything else is absolutely fine my only problem is that I struggle to read it and it's taking the enjoyment out of the novel for me.
The only reason everything else isn't 5 stars is because I can't read the story clearly enough to give a definite rating so I left them at 4 stars because the plot seems interesting and the author has some great ideas but without being able to properly read it I cannot happily rate it higher.
I might try to continue reading if the chapters get eddited or just slowly over time in order to spread out the strain of reading it. Good luck author and I wish you the best but I can't personally read it yet.
Amazing story line. I love how the characters are developed. The mc is really amazing love his personality. Keep the story up looking forward to the rest.
All I want to say is that you have a good And wide amagination but somehow you are locking of your phrases, wrong grammar. Although I am not good at it, but I know when I see one.
So have some review before releasing it...
What looks to be a good story, unfortunately the translation makes it almost incomprehensible. Not for individual paragraphs, the actual English isn't too bad, rather it's like the story is missing the connecting narrative. There are aspects which don't get explained and story elements dropped in out of nowhere. The relationships are hard to understand and the motives are even more filled with gaps or what I'm assuming would be social cues or language which haven't been filled in.
I think the original story could have a lot of potential, but it is let down by the translation
Need more
Lost a lot of brain cells reading this, the world building is prettg nice, but after chap 21 I couldnt keep going with the other aspects.
If you feel like it and has a lot of time to waste, you can read this, if not, well...
You SHOULD get another one to invest your valuable time.