Where did the author go?! COME BACK PRECIOUS AUTHOR!
Mr. Author It takes 1k points to Heal his Dantian. But 1 million to heal his arms. What im saying is that Doesn't make sense. I've read hundreds of Cultivation Novels but Never, And I Mean NEVER!!! was it harder to fix the ARMS than the DANTIAN . Normally it only takes a Great quality Healing pills to heal physical injury from poison wounds or CURSES But if you damage Your SOUL, DANTIAN, OR SPIRIT it will take IMMORTAL HEAVEN BENDING GODLY MIRACULOUS PILL or ELIXIR to heal the dantian, soul or spirit But in this novel healing the soul dantian or spirit is 1000× times easier than healing a Arm Injury. This is the first time I've encountered such setting But you're the author after all you decide how the world common sense , reason or logic. Is there actually any reason about this ridiculous event?
I’m going to be honest I only read the first 14 chapters. But so far there’s seems to be a lot things that don’t make sense. First off, the talismans book cost 500 points,which makes sense but then he takes only a month to learn how to….write???? You telling me no one else can do such a simple thing. There’s zero down cost like??? No theory learning, using mana or “nux” to write/infuse, etc. Meaning a 3 year old child could make one. Next him having above average compresión is fine, but he can just see 2 people and already tell who is stronger? Even if they had a severe injury before???knows how to perfectly fight even though it seemed he had barely any fighting experience? I scrolled past the chapters and seemed like it would continue. So I can’t give this story more than a 2.
Awesome ................................
Amazing work author
The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers .I liked this novel very much.
At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is such a great book witha an amazing plot , the blurb of the story says it all , you write so well and top of all this is an outstanding book . I like the spirits of both of your leading characters .
keep it up and would sure recommend this book ❤❤❤..
So, before I start reviewing this novel and explaining as to why I am giving it 5 stars, I want to say that Author should change the name of this novel to Revival of Eastern Roman Empire/Roman Empire, using the name some idiot thought to be romantic shouldn't be allowed.
now, with ranting out of the way, let's move on to the review itself.
Writing Quality - it isn't superb per-say, but, it only has few occasional mistakes and as such deserves at least 4.5 stars.
Stability of Updates - 5 stars, because looking at it, it doesn't seem like he missed a day without a reason(such as being in the army, duh)
Story Development - one of the things I really love in this novel is that it doesn't jump you straight into the action, it introduces characters left and right without making you feel tired and overwhelmed with all the Greek or Turkish names. fight scenes aren't forced and they are quite nicely introduced into the play. as such story development of this novel gets 5 stars.
Character Design - now, this is the major thing that you should love in this novel if you love history... and that is characters... almost every character in this novel is someone you can google and learn more about. the only mistake I have seen so far in 90 chapters is Vladislav II Dracula, and it isn't that big of a mistake, just delete 'Dracula' in that name and everything is fine. Main Character is a likeable character and Side characters are actually important and 'alive', with their distinct personalities.
World background - now this one is tough to rate because there are some amazing details that Author has implemented in his story, but there are some absurd things as well... like there being smoking pipes in the 15th century... as such I am giving the world background solid 4.8(there are other mistakes as well apart from smoking pipes, that's why it gets 4.8)
Finally, the novel itself according to these criteriums gets... 4.825 Stars :P but Webnovel says it's 4.8... (don't trust it)
I just read this work and it looks new. But I'm quite interested in the portrayal of the character, I hope the story is really good in the future. I'm waiting for the next update
There's really nothing negative I can say about this story. Beautifully written, strong and distinct characters, and a very intriguing premise that will keep the reader glued to the screen to find out more about what is going on. The dialogue is great and the splashes of Italian make it all the more authentic. I also think the cutting backwards and forwards in time and telling the story in non-linear fashion was an excellent technique to draw the reader in. I will be sure to keep reading on further in this one. The protagonist is a really well-developed character. He is one who has come from a poor family and I look forward to finding out how he has ended up rich and powerful pretending to be a man who we find out was murdered in front of him and has been communicating to him as a ghost. Great idea which has me eager to keep on reading. This one is definitely a must-read!
The MC is lucky and OP ofcourse. But he is smart or atleast have brain unlike the other novels. And just for that fact I will give at least 4 stars.
He has all what he need in the world, but he has somewhat reasonable restrictions.
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