I have also read the novel you have taken inspiration from and I must say the quality of your novel matches my expectations.
Really good.
Awesome novel.
Keep it up!
Also do try to not go down the path of that novel where plot development was basically almost gone towards the end.
Though fluff always keeps you hooked I guess
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plz
So Far i am thoroughly enjoying this
Before reading this novel make sure to turn off your brain (Yes turn it off)
MC is 1 of those Stupid Idiotic Moron.
MC also mention that he read a cultivation novel before so he should know that leaving the cave he is currently in or anywhere with a weak/low cultivation is courting death.
MC keep complaining all the time despite the system helping him.
Plot is very bland, generic. I don't mind the plot if the MC is not a brainless like the MC in here. Yes brainless, Brainless to the core so if you get what I mean then dont waste your time reading this novel, it will definetly gives you a frustration and irritation not worth enjoying.
5/5 in writing because it pretty much clear and understandable
The only downside of this novel is the MC.
Nice work. Nice concept and plot. I'm liking this! I have always been a big fan of dark and overpowered characters. Keep it up author. Please update frequently
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when yonome talks about giving herself to the demon king it sounds like a generic isekai but I don't mind it I love how the story is paced and when will we see the demon king himself
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My only problem with that novel is the Writing Quality.... ..... pls hire a proofreader..................................................................................................................................................
I like how you talk about the realm of life and death it caught my interest! It's amazing that people will have powers in the future. Wishing that I can live in that time.