HopelessRomantic32
Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Werewolf slayer is a story everyone should add to their collection . I love the story a lot. Nice job author ?
the writing and description overall is good though I feel the story a little empty honestly. it would have been better if there was an introduction about how the mc died in the first chapter, here we're directly thrown in action without context(the synopsis isn't enough it has to be in the story ) another point is that it's a system story, I expect more action, how will the mc evolve further? it feels too slow. I hope to see an improvement in these aspects , you have won a daily reader after all :D
I think that the prologue part is totally not needed right now. The way I see it, it can be very eye opening if the prologue part can be used further in the story.otherwise, it's a good book. But I strongly insist that you improve on vocabulary expressions and make the scenes the characters more descriptive.
Pretty similar to reincarnated as dragon Lord still it contains it's originally good work story develops at great aspect worth to invest time to read
His appearance is unique, making my eyes fresh again, colorful eyes that are half round. Very different from the eyes of most people.
2. Ridicoulus Human II (Uncommon)
"Oh, yes, I've heard it from my friend."
"You didn't know who they are? They are KARMA Real Life desu."
Her eyes snapped wide open as she turned toward the fearsome crack that splintered the glided doors nearest the ornate brass locks. Scarlett froze, astonished by the transformation of the amiable French soldiers who had searched her moments ago.
Neha: are you ordering me?
"No one can be worse than they are!.."
