A traveler that changes the world

It’s an okay idea. It’s not original since there’s been novels with the same premise as martial spirits or battle souls, but it seems the author decided to use western names despite being in eastern culture. It really isn’t a problem for the normal reader except some cultivation fans. The problem is the grammatical errors. There‘d also some spelling mistakes here and there.Suggest author install grammarly on his device. It would improve the novel. Anyway that all for now, might change my review in the future…

This is something I would read any day.The plot looks promising and the system seems a tad bit unique from the normal ones. Furthermore the quality of the chapter is next level, the author makes almost negligible errors making this a fun to read book.Things i expect in the future:Character DevelopmentConsistent UpdatesConsistent Quality of chapterWish you all the best for the future chapters Author-san

Up to chapter i read its good but dude pls name the chapters so it can make some people read it readily as not all people will try to read every novel in webnovel wish you dont discontinue and continue to write it wisely :)

It's been three months since he had been taken here. At first his will was strong. He convinced himself that he was not afraid of death, but, as he saw the people imprisoned around him were taken one after the other and only a few returned to then be taken again and never come back.

At the same time Lucas's kick to the back also connected.

"O-Obito...Otouto...You are alive...You ar-