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The best words I can use to describe this novel would be ‘decent’Its not the best novel out there, nor is it the most intriguing.But that’s not a bad thing. I would say it’s a very good casual reader friendly book. The story has a intresting premise to keep the readers focus. Even though the book starts with a common villain Transmigration gimmic, it rapidly diverges and builds its own story. The mc dosent become the protagonist sidekick nor does he involve himself with the main plot of the book. His journey is to make sure he changes his destiny. Having read too many hyper realistic novels, reading a novel with a strong mc with a clear focus and charming personality is just refreshing. Some times you just want to see an op mc who always gets the best outcome. An mc who is not a pushover and is proactive with the girls he likes. This book really fills this niche very well. The writing quality is good and so is the pacing. The reader is almost never overwhelmed with information but at the same time information is given in small intervals. Again I might not seem like I am praising the book, but I really do appreciate such books. Even though the book is cliche, it still feels fresh. I would recommend everyone to read this book. Its one of the best casual reading experience one can have.I am happy I decided to read this book because it reminded me how enjoyable books like these can be. Keep up the good work Author.
Have read the novel the plot is insane alongside with the story development
Finally a frrreaking good story and not even isekai! Kinda giving those Oshi no ko vibes and awesome cause its fantasy and willing to go outside the box to bring the best kinda tale to date which is refreshing. thank goodness you got this nice dynamic in the setting and pushing a small boundary with your works! I am looking forward to what else you will do!
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Writing Quality: 4/5It was not bad, better than a lot I seen on here. Keep up with the good grammar. Although the dialogue bothers me because I don't know who is talking.Updating Stability: 5/5I give that to everyoneStory Development: 4/5Good plot, although it is more descriptions and less dialogue. I did enjoyed the storyline and pacing.Character Design: 5/5Not bad, I don't have much to say though.World Background: 5/5Extremely descriptive, doesn't live anything out on how the world is.Keep up the good work!
updated review as of 1st arc. writing quality is excellent, the author has a unique and engaging writing style. the story development is where this novel shines. At the beginning it is a pendulum that mirrors reality with expectation. the first few chapters show the expectations and grand aspirations of the MC. but then we are reminded of the grim dark reality, and I won't spoil anything but it is very dark and violent. it transitions into the main theme of the novel. developing the character through his failures and advances. the story isnt slow paced, nor super fast, it feels like it hits the perfect in between. the world building is great so far, not an overwhelming amount. just enough to build the world up as the story progresses. the update rate is great, the author clearly has a solid idea of his book and he doesn't skimp on the quality while writing a lot of chapters. I' suck at writing reviews. in essence this novel is a 10/1p of you like grim dark in general, or novels like tyranny of steel.
This has now become one of my favourite reading . I was just to read until chapter 10 at most but I became addicted and couldn't stop anymore. The pace is somewhat slow but for me it's perfect, and every characters has his own unique personality(I particularly like those crazy ones tho). Finally an Mc who is smart and is not handsome at all☺.the author take his time to show us the personality of the characters he introduced, their interactions with the mc and develop them.The world building is great too with no plot holes (not one I noticed ) for now.The writing and the story become better the more you read.For actions and fight, it doesn't have much for now(ch 60) since the mc is still weak The best point of this novel for me are the interactions with different characters and their unique personality. Ps I really was not expecting that pot twist at ch 30 Ps I hope biana Is the fl Anyway, I have high expectations for this book.Sorry if my review is not that good since I'm not used to do it. This novel need more support tho, idk why it has not been noticed by now. I wish I could give more than 5 star. What I don't like about this book is that I have to wait for new chapters now??????
i love this story wayyy too much i reread sometimes just to experience certain chapters again. amazing story plots, amazing fleshed out characters, fantastic world building with lore behind it and would definitely recommend reading and the amount of times i physicaly reacted to some scenes its just so good.its not some overpowered mc with cheat skills, no systems with level ups, not some harem with plastic characters, its serious when it needs to be, funny when it needs to be and so wholesome which can flip to grusome. its the adventure of these characters in a foreign world that has avatar the last airbender vibes but with isekai tones. the narration sometimes gets sassy and just mocks certain things in the story making it a really fun read.by far the best thing are the characters. the main four are so entertaining to watch interact. fumekos the cutest tsundere istg , Jotou the protag whos flawed yet perfect. hotaru the moral compass. And then, my favourite main character asobi, is utter chaos in every sense of the word. the fight scenes in this are just, chef's kiss. there is not TOO many since the writing is more suited for a longterm adventure and places importance on the characters and the plot but when they happen, omg its satisfying. the little details, the way each person fights differently, you can really feel the pain when someone gets injured or the WATCH OUT feeling when someone is about to get hit.its an amazing read imo and an experience. it dips to depression and trauma and then suddenly there are ducks shooting beams of light, some gory fight scene with practical magic and elements then theres a cute wholesome yuri scene that makes my heart flutter. idk what else to say except, fantastic job.