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I already read the books from you and expecting the same level of story telling in this novel also. Already a great start for this novel. Hope there are story lines in both inside and outside the games like in other novel of yours. Waiting for more chapters and the story development. Is your novels published has books or hardcopies to read..
Where is everyone?Hello!I don’t like being alone.———————————If you have any questions just ask I will try to answer them
I like the the general idea of the the novel,but, like other reviews i read i absolutely agree on the fact that the pacing is way too slow.after over 100 chapters the mc should have gone trough a lot more stuff. I mean seriously does it really take 10 chapters for a mc to hitch a ride go to the market sell his stuff and go back home?
Definitely better writing quality than SUUSB. I can't even put it into word it's like a professional author wrote this.
This is amazing, you should read it.
The culture, references and mythology is pretty accurate the only people I found was with the unrealistic economics not even countries can move 33 Trillion dollars in a day it is literally impossible.
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Wil not even try to read now.....
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Wow. This is the literal best novel I’ve ever read, and dayum it is not what I was expecting it do be
Giving it 5
The concept of the story is really good. Who has not wished for an open world Star Wars story. A good one.
But the development does not make sense. It is way too rushed. It is said that the force user class is difficult to get and to master. He gets it by visiting the hangar in Naboo (visiting a movie place). That’s it. Ok, I’m a Star Wars fan, and I want a Jedi main character, let’s pass on that one.
Once he joins the Jedi, he learns that he has to master the skills by himself (there are no skills learnt by default in the class Jedi or with. You have to explore and learn by yourself. Love the idea. In a week he is a Jedi Palawan ready for missions. A bit too fast, but still within the acceptable. Not even a month (in game, outside not even a week since it’s a 4 time dilation) and he is a jedi knight, a senator and owns a planet. Instantly a millionaire in real life…really?
This story just needed time to develop, but it has been in my opinion developed in such a speed that is not possible in a game. You don’t become powerful and rich in a galaxy wide game in less than a month time in game.
Realizing I havent left a reveiw and I’m a faithful reader...
I haven't read it but I just had to tell you that you're not going to get much readers with a synopsis like that. It's not detailed, interesting, or anything that grabs the attention of people who stop to see what you've got for a story. Good luck