I dislike the word requirement like what is this english class? cant I just say I like it without having to write a while paragraph. Its a bloody good read and thats it.
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Keep it up dude.
good work :)
The start is quite compelling. The novel begins in medias res, so you're thrown into the litrpg world right away. Skills, levels and stats occurr from the very beginning. The first narrative arch is mainly about Helial and his little sister Lumia.
Things liven up soon enough. As the first adventures unfold, you immediately grow fonder of the main characters.
I would recommend this novel for its enthralling plot. The flashbacks and the humor are the strong points. (Lasagna for president).
The only weakness are the secondary characters in the second narrative arch (as well as Vidio in the first one). It's not like they're not well-written, I just personally didn't appreciate them much. Maybe it's just the main character who outshines them
You can tell that the author has put a lot of thought into this story. I love the prologue. It kind of reminds me of Ready Player One mixed with classic fantasy. Can't wait for more!
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First I'm good to say great work author, I really like the book title and the synopsis was captivating too, even though the book is still in it early stage, the chapters were well written and I can already tell that the book has great potential. so keep up the good work author, keep updating.
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Great story with solid writing, an intriguing story, amazing description, and interesting characters. I think the writing is solid, with a few minor things that could be changed (some paragraphs should be shortened). This is definitely worth the read for a different type of story to enjoy.
Another review after 2 weeks to help the author. the release rate has been consistent and the story progress at fast pace.
Hello everyone,
It's been a month and over 30,000 words since I released the first chapters, since we're right in front of the 50k words mark, I feel it's time to do a decent review of what I think of the novel, myself.
Before I start, I would like to say a few things. At first, I started writing out of boredom, but before I knew it, I was absorbed in my own story and I started to enjoy writing for the story itself. It was both fun and pain sometimes going from work to writing, from writing to bed, and back to work, every.single.day.
However, I still managed to deliver quite a lot of chapters, even though it was my first time writing. So let's see what I think about the novel so far.
The first ten chapters are both good and bad. They are sophisticated but not perfectly delivered, there are grammatical errors and some chapters are boring to read.
However, lately, I've been trying to go through them again and polish them as much as I can without changing any information for people who have already read them.
If you survive those chapters the writing should get better with each chapter, it's still a bit messy until chapter 25 or 26 when I started to pay a lot more attention to how I write.
The progress of the story is a bit slower, but from the 19th chapter, you can look forward to a series of actions.
But don't worry because some of the actions are in the earlier chapters as well.
I've also increased the word count in each chapter with almost every new release. Or at least compared to the first 10 chapters.
With the current latest chapter, I delivered what I wanted. And we can now start a new saga. A saga of friendship and companions, rivals and enemies, and much more.
Please look forward to the next chapters.
Great story and no grammar mistakes so far, hope it keeps in the same pace. So far the writing quality feels nice, long time I dont see a funny book like this one.
also, nice cover haha