Just finish the book and don't worry about the lonely prick. I support you guy/woman you.
great read so far. on chapter 4, but I am already anxiously waiting for the next update!
The world building is good as you can see it has mysteries which leave us to wonder. I like the mc personally I feel like I would relate to mc he feels very human not too arrogant and a bit of humor. The characters are described well. Great work and keep it up.
Really enjoyed the early chapters. like flashed-actiopn without the depth of emotion and character, but that's okay. After all, that's basically the definition of a light novel, right? but sadly sorry author, I stopped at chapter 238. Not only did it start to get boring with lots of repetitive scenes without any novelty, the standard idea of becoming a god with the use of faith but also as one might expect a clichéd plot: a vague hatred of the Japanese nation like many Chinese novel authors generally do. the author doesn't even hesitate to hide it by using the alias Sakura for example, he openly mentions the name Tokyo and the names of Japanese islands. It seems that Chinese authors suffer from an itch if they don't write fantasy novels without involving the Japanese: either by making them antagonists, or by making their country disappear. increasingly boring and predictable
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Not going to lie, it's the MC that kills this one for me. I have seen case studies on children raised by wolves and this boy is worse than that. He was raised by years by a man who taught him basic skills, but that also means he was socialized to an extent. Since the story started the MC has been in society at least virtually for 3 years, yet he is still acting like a total savage? nah, unless he actually has a mental illness or a developmental disability there is no way this dude is this clueless to human interaction. I am sure it was intended to be humorous and/or edgy, but it absolutely detracts from the story.
This story is kind of similar the one i read into other apps called SAGO the name story is THE GOD OF WAR BACK FROM THE DEAD. anyways I'm gonna keep reading this one, i love this kind of story though..
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I love modern world and ancient world traveling that only MC can do.
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Eu não gosto do mundo de MHA . Eu estava entusiasmada para ler uma fanfic do Reinhart . Mas ele foi logo para esse mundo
Shameless author review. The plot is a really planned one. Do note that I’m still 14 years old and therefore busy with school, so I can’t upload consistently. Every chapters is average 1.2k words. My writing quality is the main thing I want to improve for the time being. That’s why I want you all to write a critic about my grammar or choices of words or my descriptive texts and dialogues, I know that there’s at least 20 faults and it would be greatly valued, if you write a critic.
Thank you. Enjoy!
Sigh. It has a good start but too long and windy middle part. The characters are a but flat and yeah, even the choice of heroine is so bad. Sigh. Seems writer is fantastical about rich and glory and typical rich man life.