you kind of left it off at a hanger. what happens when his dad finds put mlm left him? what happens with Rafe and her moving to Boston?? you should add chapters. I will buy them .
Beautiful storyline. Well written
Testing to review again
This is too good.......
Mafia books are the best and you didn't disappoint me Author
awesome work author!!
i wish we would have saw there children's too
This is a remarkable work. The author laid it in a super comprehensive manner with highly descriptive words, thus, the every events just keep on popping in my head like they are being performed in front of my eyes. Also, the plot is full of surprising turns. Dive in to this novel for an adventure.
Highly recommended
wonderful novel
The story line is interesting but the lack of updates and no communication from the author is a bummer.
This narrative isn't particularly compelling. Honestly, the author lacked direction, frequently shifting plotlines abruptly for no logical reason. Initially, it started as a tale of a transmigrated slave and a demon king's daughter surviving in a new world, but then it diverged into building wealth, an unplanned harem, conflict prevention, even forcing suicide plots – all seemingly thrown in haphazardly or abandoned due to convenience or oversight. Time skips appeared without any clear rationale, introducing new protagonists and more unexplained elements, like summoning "heroic spirits."
It appears the author's personal fantasy evolved within the story, centering on their own character, with a loli daughter, multiple romantic interests, and a god-like status. The series "Two Son-Con Moms" (I can't recall the exact title, but that's the essence) shares similar traits, excessive self-indulgence and lack of coherent planning. If you're seeking depth or well-developed characters, this isn't the book for you. It might pass the time if you're not too invested, but it's far from exceptional. I'd rate it 3 out of 5, suggesting the author should perhaps find a more fulfilling creative outlet.
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So reading some of these negative reviews, I'm starting to wonder if we're even reading the same novel?
Like the review from Monsters said: this story takes place in the world of a heterosexual hentai game. I would be shocked if the main lead (ML) was NOT kinky and obsessed with sex. Also, due to this setting,
**Spoiler**
- the sharing of life essence (which will keep people alive in dire situations) is completed through sex.
- Once you get a little further in and realize the above, the actions the ML chooses to take in the prologue (which loops back around after a few chapters) make a lot more sense.
- Effectively, Zagan was on death's door, and Luca was desperate to keep him alive at that point. He didn't exactly have time to ask first since Zagan wasn't conscious, and afterwards, Zagan was quite grateful to Luca for saving his life.
While I'm reading this story, Luca (ML) comes across as being utterly devoted to Zagan to the point of having no interest in what would have been his harem of girls in the original game. Where I'm currently at (around chapter 46), they're constantly flirting with each other, and if something bothers one of them, they actually talk to the other one about it. It's so nice to see communication happening instead of misunderstandings getting blown out of proportion.
Also, yes, the prologue is dub-con, but outside of one other situation so far where
**Spoiler**
- Zagan was again in very real danger of dying,
- Luca is very much about consent. The author clearly likes kinky stuff, but the really kinky stuff is generally kept to side stories and can be ignored if you're more after vanilla stuff.
- That balloon thing though—let's all pretend that never happened.
I could see an argument for the rape tag from the perspective of the "original game" this story is based on, which is not a nice one. When Zagan talks about "original events" in the game, there are several mentions of rape. Thankfully, the Zagan of this story is not interested in taking that path.
Maybe I'm seeing this in a different light because I've re-read it 5 or 6 times now? I don't know if that would change the way one sees this story or not, but I just felt like getting my thoughts on this one documented because I really don't see this story the way most of the negative reviews paint it.
I will certainly circle back if things change, but as it stands, this story is a 5-star for me.