Despite the grammatical errors, the story is pretty interesting so far. I really like this style of Japanese Isekai, I hope you don't abandon the story
Keep working, author. Nice novel!
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Writing quality is something that I should consider as a 'master piece ' . It's literally too good.
But updates r not stable. Do hope that author will sort that issue out.
Am gonna to be permanent reader. Nice job Author.
Aside from few grammar errors, it was interesting. I'll be waiting for more chapters because the plot was interesting.................................
Would highly recommend this novel, it has an amazing story that hooks you straight in.
The way the magic is do is very interesting and the characters are just as interesting.
I'd highly recommend giving this novel a try it is a great read especially if you like magic
This story started off pretty promising with interesting characters. unfortunately this story suffers really hard from having a million female characters to balance. they all eventually become a one dimensional horny character that thinks almost of nothing else other than sex and semen. All the "conflict" he had is very short lived and mc characters has a serious wuxia syndrome being really overpowered. None if his powers does not feel earned and its just a really overindulgence male sex fantasy. its a real shame it turned out like this.
The book is really interesting ans many things are still to ve discovered. I am very excited.[img=update][img=fp][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp]
excellent story. plzzzzzzzz....... update more chapters✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️. we are waiting ????????????????????????????????
I have been waiting so long for a translation for this novel. Unfortunately, great story ruined by poor translation. Please put some effort in your translation team, webnovel.
Mandatory 5-star self-review. I'm confident in the quality of my writing and guarantee you its consistency throughout the book.If you like grim worlds with a dark fantasy feel, unfathomable Lovecraftian horrors, and the threat of madness at every corner, this is the story for you. As I have noted, the beginning will be slow but not uninteresting. The protagonist is highly intelligent, manipulative, and cunning but not overly ruthless nor a murder hobo. His first taste of power will come relatively late, but it will be sweet, and worth it after all the hurdles he will have faced.If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. Also, don't forget to vote and leave a review. It greatly motivates me to continue writing!
While it doesn’t bring much new to the equation of saving the villainess otome isekai otome game more than makes up for it in some of the best excecution I’ve seen in some time. Characters: The protagonist and love interest are likeable and have great chemistry, the antagonist is deliciously hatable but not too the degree where it effects the readers suspension of disbelief, (as a side people like that exist I have met them), side characters aren’t neglected at all and have enough spotlight placed on them that they are memorable but not so much that they steal the spotlight from the main cast.Pacing: it retains a good forward momentum so that you feel like something worth reading has happened but doesn’t feel rushed. Plot points don’t feel needlessly dragged out and every word feels as if it serves a purpose rather than being there to increase word count.Settings: the setting is a typical magic school otome setting nothing really of note here but the story is character driven so that doesn’t retract from the quality overall.Release rate: a good stable one chapter per week with consistent quality, minimal typos, and moderate length.Writing Quality: Great, it’s clearly been properly proofread, the author clearly cares about this story and i haven’t run into any instances where I had to read a section more than once to figure out what’s going on. PS: to the author, originality is overrated, execution is far more important so don’t take my comment on “not bringing anything new to the equation” as a negative point.
When someone with the strength to crush your skull with their bare hands and is a walking one man army that gets reincarnated what could go wrong I love this story and am aways up to date, I came here from Reddit.